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Array ( [sid] => 66659 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Bruised [time] => 2004-10-08 22:24:11 [hometext] => This is what I'm left with when my boyfriend of three years leaves me...my life just can't get any better, since everyone I love either dies or leaves me on their on accord. [bodytext] => Since you asked,
I'll tell you how I'm feeling,
Here I am, an open book, unmasked....
Going through this is hard, but I'm dealing.
You used me, like you swore
You wouldn't.
You took it away, made me feel like a whore,
And after that you couldn't
Stick around, because now I'm just old news.
The only thing I have to show
For it are these bruises.
So to you I say "bravo".
You bruised my heart,
You bruised my mind.
You called me your sweetheart,
And then left me behind.
I loved you unconditionally,
I gave you all I had.
But then you left me lonely,
Lonely and so sad.
You ended up
With everything,
And you left me all shookup.
Now all I have is the aching
You bruised my skin,
You bruised my soul,
You bruised me from within
And now I'm left with nothing but this pistole. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 152 [topic] => 22 [informant] => silent_tears [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

Bruised

Contributed by silent_tears on Friday, 8th October 2004 @ 10:24:11 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

Since you asked,
I'll tell you how I'm feeling,
Here I am, an open book, unmasked....
Going through this is hard, but I'm dealing.
You used me, like you swore
You wouldn't.
You took it away, made me feel like a whore,
And after that you couldn't
Stick around, because now I'm just old news.
The only thing I have to show
For it are these bruises.
So to you I say "bravo".
You bruised my heart,
You bruised my mind.
You called me your sweetheart,
And then left me behind.
I loved you unconditionally,
I gave you all I had.
But then you left me lonely,
Lonely and so sad.
You ended up
With everything,
And you left me all shookup.
Now all I have is the aching
You bruised my skin,
You bruised my soul,
You bruised me from within
And now I'm left with nothing but this pistole.

Copyright © silent_tears ... [ 2004-10-08 22:24:11]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Bruised (User Rating: 1 )
by shanarah on Friday, 8th October 2004 @ 10:33:11 PM AEST
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deeply wounded, I can feel your pain, Im sorry. There is hope just hang in there, you will see!! great write. take care,
shanarah...

Re: Bruised (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Saturday, 9th October 2004 @ 06:23:32 AM AEST
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a very pained write, deep and full of raw emotion, I am also sorry for your pain, I hope for you in time it will heal and you can smile again,

takecare

pixie xx

Re: Bruised (User Rating: 1 )
by n2dep2care on Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 08:53:36 PM AEST
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Painfully emotional and powerful write. Very well done!

Laurie

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