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It's All Because Of You
Contributed by
ll
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Friday, 8th October 2004 @ 07:13:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Get out of my way but don't ever go away
You can make me lose control
But I should be too smart for this
You know it gets the better of me
Sometimes when you and I collide
I always end up in the ocean haunted by you
Pulling me out of time
Dont let me drown or youll let me down
I say its all because of you
And here I go, losing my control
It doesnt seem right, to look you in the eye
Let all the things you mean to me
Come tumbling out my mouth
Indeed its time to tell you why
I say its infinitely true
Say youll stay
Or say youll leave
Theres a choice you have to make
I need to know
All about you
And theres no cure
But theres no way to be sure
Why is everything turning inside out
My head is batting with words
My heart is losing its purpose
My head is battling with my heart
Instilling so much doubts, it makes me so tired
I feel so uninspired
My logic has been torn apart
And now its time to say
Its all because of you
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ll
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2004-10-08 19:13:16]
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Re: It's All Because Of You
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by Yousef on
Friday, 8th October 2004 @ 07:19:14 PM AEST
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| May be you say it's dark but I say it's emotional, we may disagree about the kind or the type but we won't disagree about whether it's good or bad, because it's a good one, I liked the part that say "My head is batting with words, My heart is losing it’s purpose, My head is battling with my heart", very realistic and sensational, keep it up. |
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Re: It's All Because Of You
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 8th October 2004 @ 11:00:39 PM AEST
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| good write. |
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