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Find a place in my head
You seem to have no problems
Seeing through me anyway
Don’t look at me
You look right through me
As if I have no life
As if I have no meaning
Don’t talk to me
It’s as if there is no voice
As you walk right by
As you see right over me
And through me
And in me
I can’t hide it
Don’t over do it
It’ll hurt both of us
It’ll find a way to eat away
Away at what we have
So easily is it misjudged
Misaimed and inappropriate
The feelings that we have
Over exaggerated and under
So please don’t look over me
Or under and above
Because so easily is it hurt
And punctured and deflated
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Find Me

Contributed by MnMnMsrcool on Thursday, 7th October 2004 @ 08:15:07 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

Find me
Find a place in my head
You seem to have no problems
Seeing through me anyway
Don’t look at me
You look right through me
As if I have no life
As if I have no meaning
Don’t talk to me
It’s as if there is no voice
As you walk right by
As you see right over me
And through me
And in me
I can’t hide it
Don’t over do it
It’ll hurt both of us
It’ll find a way to eat away
Away at what we have
So easily is it misjudged
Misaimed and inappropriate
The feelings that we have
Over exaggerated and under
So please don’t look over me
Or under and above
Because so easily is it hurt
And punctured and deflated

Copyright Â© MnMnMsrcool ... [ 2004-10-07 20:15:07]
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Re: Find Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Katie2008 on Thursday, 7th October 2004 @ 09:19:19 PM AEST
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This is really well written. I get that feeling a lot, too. When someone tries to look through you...lol I don't know. Nice write.
Katie

Re: Find Me (User Rating: 1 )
by hoist1atca on Thursday, 7th October 2004 @ 11:15:27 PM AEST
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Well written poem-
Sad but to the point-
Maybe you should help this person to find their place in your heart and not your mind.
Aint (LOVE} grand?

Re: Find Me (User Rating: 1 )
by runaway0516 on Saturday, 9th October 2004 @ 08:14:11 AM AEST
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this is a great write with a great flow and i can definately relate

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