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Array ( [sid] => 66443 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => What Was That Thing? [time] => 2004-10-07 08:38:03 [hometext] => I wrote this as a poem -how my hubby told me it happened...as this did happen to him 7 years ago... [bodytext] => asleep in the beach shack
in a room on my own
I feel a presence
I am not alone
through a window
it apears
I try to get up
but I can't I'm in tears
my mind and my body
is under a force
trying to rise
It's like a curse
I mumble help, help
no one hears
as I fight
this thing goes inside
my mouth that night
I gag and I shake
it goes down my throat
my stomach rises
suddenly I float
I am now asleep
it feels like forever
when I finally rise
I know this happened but my friends day never!

The owners of the shack also had experiences simular to the above but still...it leaves you wondering...what was that thing?
[comments] => 5 [counter] => 170 [topic] => 49 [informant] => inoc [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => mystical )

What Was That Thing?

Contributed by inoc on Thursday, 7th October 2004 @ 08:38:03 AM in AEST
Topic: mystical

asleep in the beach shack
in a room on my own
I feel a presence
I am not alone
through a window
it apears
I try to get up
but I can't I'm in tears
my mind and my body
is under a force
trying to rise
It's like a curse
I mumble help, help
no one hears
as I fight
this thing goes inside
my mouth that night
I gag and I shake
it goes down my throat
my stomach rises
suddenly I float
I am now asleep
it feels like forever
when I finally rise
I know this happened but my friends day never!

The owners of the shack also had experiences simular to the above but still...it leaves you wondering...what was that thing?

Copyright © inoc ... [ 2004-10-07 08:38:03]
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Re: What Was That Thing? (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Thursday, 7th October 2004 @ 09:27:23 AM AEST
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That was a little unsettling. Good write.

Re: What Was That Thing? (User Rating: 1 )
by Remy on Thursday, 7th October 2004 @ 11:11:35 AM AEST
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*ponders* i'll hold my tongue to the question. interesting write, had me thinking... ;0)
~Remy~

Re: What Was That Thing? (User Rating: 1 )
by sandy_poetrygodslove on Thursday, 7th October 2004 @ 10:06:01 PM AEST
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Good write, easy flow of words and understandable.. thanks for reading my poetry. You read my poem My bedroom is haunted I wonder if I gone through what you husband had.. of course nothing went into my body but I say it grabs me and makes my body tingle all over and it frightens me. sandy

Re: What Was That Thing? (User Rating: 1 )
by Cynthia on Friday, 22nd October 2004 @ 11:26:26 AM AEST
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Inoc, this was very interesting. It has me wondering myself. *S* Cynthia

Re: What Was That Thing? (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 9th January 2005 @ 11:35:10 PM AEST
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There is kind of a state where this sort of thing happens. I had it happen once where I woke and couldn't speak or move temporarily. It's wierd. Anyway, there were a couple mispelled words, but overall interesting. Cheers!

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