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Array ( [sid] => 66380 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I Bleed [time] => 2004-10-06 19:34:51 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I bleed the hurt
That wont go away
I bleed the pain
that’s still here today

I bleed the anger
that’s still inside
I bleed the rage
Of wanting to die

I bleed away
Your memory
I bleed away
What will never be

Some cuts are deep
Some just scratches
It all depends
On what life catches

I still try
To forget what happened
But the truth still bleeds
The knife keeps tappin [comments] => 7 [counter] => 153 [topic] => 36 [informant] => tractorbabe [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

I Bleed

Contributed by tractorbabe on Wednesday, 6th October 2004 @ 07:34:51 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

I bleed the hurt
That wont go away
I bleed the pain
that’s still here today

I bleed the anger
that’s still inside
I bleed the rage
Of wanting to die

I bleed away
Your memory
I bleed away
What will never be

Some cuts are deep
Some just scratches
It all depends
On what life catches

I still try
To forget what happened
But the truth still bleeds
The knife keeps tappin

Copyright Â© tractorbabe ... [ 2004-10-06 19:34:51]
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Re: I Bleed (User Rating: 1 )
by ALineAboveTheStepBeneath on Wednesday, 6th October 2004 @ 07:41:11 PM AEST
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I'm not usually a big fan of rhyming poetry, but you did a good job on this one.

Re: I Bleed (User Rating: 1 )
by Yousef on Wednesday, 6th October 2004 @ 08:25:18 PM AEST
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Good poem, well written and well prsented too, it's really stirring and gloomy, but that's what it is supposed to be!! Good effort.

Re: I Bleed (User Rating: 1 )
by Spazzo on Wednesday, 6th October 2004 @ 08:59:13 PM AEST
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Great write.

Re: I Bleed (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 6th October 2004 @ 09:06:09 PM AEST
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great write. i hope things get better for you. i will pray for you. God bless. peace n love.
jenny

Re: I Bleed (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Wednesday, 6th October 2004 @ 10:53:31 PM AEST
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fantastic write. only so much blood in you to bleed away though...

Re: I Bleed (User Rating: 1 )
by Hoots on Thursday, 7th October 2004 @ 12:25:52 PM AEST
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Wow! I can totally relate to this one. This explains perfectly what cutting is all about....bleeding out unwanted emotions instead of expressing them. I've never been able to find the words to describe it...now I know. Thanks for sharing....keep writing.
Krystle

Re: I Bleed (User Rating: 1 )
by mylastwords on Monday, 18th October 2004 @ 10:16:37 PM AEST
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i agree with the comment above...it really does express cutting...i used to cut...i havent for a while...but i still have to resist the urge...its so hard...i wanna cut all the time...but i know i cant...
keep writing!
hope everything works out for you...just hold on...if ever you need a friend...someone who will listen...just pm me...ok...?

luv always xxooxx mylastwords xxooxx

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