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Array ( [sid] => 66186 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Apathetic [time] => 2004-10-05 09:38:47 [hometext] => It's all about people who think they know you but don't really care about what you go through. [bodytext] => You pick through heads all the time
Always reading between the lines
Your so pathetic
Just hold to you reality
But first find out what it means to be
Apathetic
The way you dont see
What it means to be me
Your so apathetic

You focus on why
You ask me
You focus on why
Then you tell me
Who am I
How do I feel
Cant you see
You really dont know
Your so apathetic

So dont mess with me
Just let me be me
It's not like you care anyway
I'll grip to my reality
I'll become you slowly
So pathetic
Bring it together
Maybe we'll see
We're so apathetic

I'll focus on why
I'll ask you
I'll focus on why
Then I'll tell you
Who you are
How you feel
But I can see
I dont really know
I'm so apathetic [comments] => 3 [counter] => 161 [topic] => 34 [informant] => Asrealthefallen10 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SongLyrics )

Apathetic

Contributed by Asrealthefallen10 on Tuesday, 5th October 2004 @ 09:38:47 AM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics

You pick through heads all the time
Always reading between the lines
Your so pathetic
Just hold to you reality
But first find out what it means to be
Apathetic
The way you dont see
What it means to be me
Your so apathetic

You focus on why
You ask me
You focus on why
Then you tell me
Who am I
How do I feel
Cant you see
You really dont know
Your so apathetic

So dont mess with me
Just let me be me
It's not like you care anyway
I'll grip to my reality
I'll become you slowly
So pathetic
Bring it together
Maybe we'll see
We're so apathetic

I'll focus on why
I'll ask you
I'll focus on why
Then I'll tell you
Who you are
How you feel
But I can see
I dont really know
I'm so apathetic

Copyright © Asrealthefallen10 ... [ 2004-10-05 09:38:47]
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Re: Apathetic (User Rating: 1 )
by valentine on Tuesday, 5th October 2004 @ 09:50:32 AM AEST
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I really like this. It's so true of people . . I love the final stanza too.
My comment doesn't really suffice about all of my feelings for this poem but i feel the emotion ; the upset and slight hints of genuine dissapointment.

~*~ Valentine ~*~

Re: Apathetic (User Rating: 1 )
by Kindredblood_dragon on Tuesday, 5th October 2004 @ 10:06:26 AM AEST
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well written and composed song, with feeling abundant, and a message within thanks for sharing.

Re: Apathetic (User Rating: 1 )
by Bohemian_with_a_pen on Wednesday, 6th October 2004 @ 02:22:13 AM AEST
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love it!!!

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