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Array ( [sid] => 65855 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Angel [time] => 2004-10-02 09:42:53 [hometext] => I'll be waiting here forever until I get a response from my one true Angel. [bodytext] => Angel

You don't only mean the world to me,
But You mean so much than what the world can offer.
With time we became friends, and as time went by,
We became the best of buddies.
I know it's hard for both, You and I,
But it may get easier,
If we can both somehow stick together,
Today and forever.

I need to ask You something quite personal,
Please don't take this the wrong way,
For it is but only all of my wishes put into a question.
Can we Angel, both, You and I, be happy together
Forever until death do us part?

I know this is hard for You to swallow.
Of course there's just no other way for me to show
You, exactly how I am feeling at this very moment.

You know, I believed every single promise You promised me.
Not knowing what woulda happened of us in the end,
Just trying the best to live out my dream,
With You here by my side, until someday we break apart.

All these flashbacks, seeing my dream be torn apart,
In all just one little flash, watching it all fall to pieces.
All that we've built together. This friendship, this love,
Watch it all fall apart in a million pieces, as well as my heart.

Still sitting here in pain writing out to You,
Just to remind You of the stops You've zoomed through.
Since You still are this road-runner inside my head today,
I ask of You but one thing, and please don't zoom away.

For I need You here by my side, today and tomorrow,
For I send to You my love even though we're miles apart,
For You should know that You put on me the biggest smile,
For I'll always hear your voice in this place called my soul.

Only one small little problem...
I do not know what it is I sit here for and need to ask of You.
Please, Angel, don't ever let go of my hand,
I beg of You please if You have but the slightest clue,
Feel free to let me know this thought rambling inside my head.


Written by *~*Lucy*~* [comments] => 5 [counter] => 220 [topic] => 32 [informant] => lucyspoetry [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )
Angel

Contributed by lucyspoetry on Saturday, 2nd October 2004 @ 09:42:53 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry



Angel

You don't only mean the world to me,
But You mean so much than what the world can offer.
With time we became friends, and as time went by,
We became the best of buddies.
I know it's hard for both, You and I,
But it may get easier,
If we can both somehow stick together,
Today and forever.

I need to ask You something quite personal,
Please don't take this the wrong way,
For it is but only all of my wishes put into a question.
Can we Angel, both, You and I, be happy together
Forever until death do us part?

I know this is hard for You to swallow.
Of course there's just no other way for me to show
You, exactly how I am feeling at this very moment.

You know, I believed every single promise You promised me.
Not knowing what woulda happened of us in the end,
Just trying the best to live out my dream,
With You here by my side, until someday we break apart.

All these flashbacks, seeing my dream be torn apart,
In all just one little flash, watching it all fall to pieces.
All that we've built together. This friendship, this love,
Watch it all fall apart in a million pieces, as well as my heart.

Still sitting here in pain writing out to You,
Just to remind You of the stops You've zoomed through.
Since You still are this road-runner inside my head today,
I ask of You but one thing, and please don't zoom away.

For I need You here by my side, today and tomorrow,
For I send to You my love even though we're miles apart,
For You should know that You put on me the biggest smile,
For I'll always hear your voice in this place called my soul.

Only one small little problem...
I do not know what it is I sit here for and need to ask of You.
Please, Angel, don't ever let go of my hand,
I beg of You please if You have but the slightest clue,
Feel free to let me know this thought rambling inside my head.


Written by *~*Lucy*~*




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Re: Angel (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Saturday, 2nd October 2004 @ 11:49:27 AM AEST
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an amazing and sad write, well worth 5/5

takecare

pixie xx


Re: Angel (User Rating: 1 )
by Dorian on Saturday, 2nd October 2004 @ 12:13:48 PM AEST
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very nice writting hope 4 the best . . . Dorian

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Re: Angel (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 2nd October 2004 @ 12:29:53 PM AEST
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sadness and longing, yet love.
Very well done!


Re: Angel (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Saturday, 2nd October 2004 @ 11:55:59 PM AEST
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good write.


Re: Angel (User Rating: 1 )
by thexshattered on Friday, 2nd March 2007 @ 03:52:55 AM AEST
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Hm... This was very disorganized. Just thoughts spewed about. No real theme or definition.

Great picture of the human mind! :)




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