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Her frail body struggles to stand
A cane is used to help her balance
I have you, I won't let you fall

Start with your right foot now your left
Take small steps, we have all day
See, I knew you can do this

The sun feels warm
A soft breeze in the air
The smell of fresh cut grass everywhere

A slow walk we take
Just lean on me
I will be your eyes
I have you, I won't let you fall

Nancy

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I Have You, I Won't Let You Fall

Contributed by greeneyes on Friday, 1st October 2004 @ 09:26:38 PM in AEST
Topic: FamilyPoems

Today we walk hand in hand
Her frail body struggles to stand
A cane is used to help her balance
I have you, I won't let you fall

Start with your right foot now your left
Take small steps, we have all day
See, I knew you can do this

The sun feels warm
A soft breeze in the air
The smell of fresh cut grass everywhere

A slow walk we take
Just lean on me
I will be your eyes
I have you, I won't let you fall

Nancy

Copyright © greeneyes ... [ 2004-10-01 21:26:38]
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Re: I Have You, I Won't Let You Fall (User Rating: 1 )
by TheVoice on Friday, 1st October 2004 @ 10:07:34 PM AEST
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such a caring beautiful piece.

keep them coming.

the voice

Re: I Have You, I Won't Let You Fall (User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on Tuesday, 5th October 2004 @ 10:35:28 PM AEST
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Oh My, this poem touched my heart and played my tender heart strings. What a loving, caring and kind person you are!
Let me be the first to welcome you to YPDC. We are like a big loving family here, and I can see that you are going to fit in terrifically!!!
Lovely write.........so touching.
Warm Poetic Hugs and love
Lovingcritters
ConSue

Re: I Have You, I Won't Let You Fall (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Saturday, 23rd October 2004 @ 10:14:10 PM AEST
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precious and loving, nancy, a beautiful poem:) hugs n' love nessa

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Re: I Have You, I Won't Let You Fall (User Rating: 1 )
by Cynthia on Saturday, 18th December 2004 @ 10:27:49 PM AEST
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Nancy, this is so considerate of you. God bless your heart. *S* Cynthia

Re: I Have You, I Won't Let You Fall (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Friday, 25th March 2005 @ 10:05:02 PM AEST
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good poem, but needs more substance to it to make it a masterpiece.

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