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Array ( [sid] => 6556 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Falling On My Face [time] => 2002-11-12 05:00:00 [hometext] => For my boyfriend. Greg, If you ever see this, I love you, and I always will, through whatever life throws at us. [bodytext] => The rain washes over me
Soaking me, drowning me
But I don't feel the cold
'Cause I'm already numb
From all this pain that's inside
It only hides the tears
That I can't stop crying
Because I'm just so scared

I don't care anymore
I'll let the world trip me
You can stand and watch me
As I fall flat on my face
'Cause he can't catch me now
The way he always has
That's enough to make me
Break down and cry here and now

You have someone who loves you
I'll never let you go
'Cause with you I feel whole
There's no more holding back
I'm gonna give you my heart
Show you how much I care
'Cause I need you to know
And pray that we get through

It's hard for me to say
But I won't hide the truth
I've put my trust in you
Please hold me till I'm okay
It shouldn't feel this way
I need to know you'll stay
I'm just a little scared
That my love won't be enough

Promise me we'll be okay
'Cause if I lost you now
I'd break beyond repair
Understand how I feel
Say the things you always say
Don't tell me it's too hard
Don't say it's not worth it
Someday love will prevail [comments] => 5 [counter] => 181 [topic] => 32 [informant] => MoonlitAngel [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 12 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )
Falling On My Face

Contributed by MoonlitAngel on Tuesday, 12th November 2002 @ 05:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry



The rain washes over me
Soaking me, drowning me
But I don't feel the cold
'Cause I'm already numb
From all this pain that's inside
It only hides the tears
That I can't stop crying
Because I'm just so scared

I don't care anymore
I'll let the world trip me
You can stand and watch me
As I fall flat on my face
'Cause he can't catch me now
The way he always has
That's enough to make me
Break down and cry here and now

You have someone who loves you
I'll never let you go
'Cause with you I feel whole
There's no more holding back
I'm gonna give you my heart
Show you how much I care
'Cause I need you to know
And pray that we get through

It's hard for me to say
But I won't hide the truth
I've put my trust in you
Please hold me till I'm okay
It shouldn't feel this way
I need to know you'll stay
I'm just a little scared
That my love won't be enough

Promise me we'll be okay
'Cause if I lost you now
I'd break beyond repair
Understand how I feel
Say the things you always say
Don't tell me it's too hard
Don't say it's not worth it
Someday love will prevail




Copyright © MoonlitAngel ... [ 2002-11-12 05:00:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: Falling On My Face (User Rating: 1 )
by Catterpillar_Girl on Tuesday, 12th November 2002 @ 05:11:56 AM AEST
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    Awwwwww!!!


Re: Falling On My Face (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Tuesday, 12th November 2002 @ 05:53:45 AM AEST
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Lovely write, Moonlit!!
Jenni


Re: Falling On My Face (User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on Tuesday, 12th November 2002 @ 07:00:51 AM AEST
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I really enjoyed this
It's full of emotion
and love, very good write
Keep em' coming
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::.


Re: Falling On My Face (User Rating: 1 )
by Emmie74 on Tuesday, 12th November 2002 @ 07:31:32 AM AEST
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Love it. I almost started crying myself. So much emotion. You guys will be okay though. I know it. The way you care about each other, it's amazing.

Love always and forever,

Emily


Re: Falling On My Face (User Rating: 1 )
by Nazaholic on Tuesday, 12th November 2002 @ 12:33:49 PM AEST
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This i can relate to. great writing lovely




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