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Array ( [sid] => 65471 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Untitled [time] => 2004-09-28 18:01:04 [hometext] => ...Cant think of a title any ideas?...comments appreciated [bodytext] => Tears streaking silently down your cheek, left me numb and unable to speak
My heart crumbles into a thousand blackend pieces and fall at your feet
Head down choking back tears I turn and walk away...
Footsteps pouding behind me.. I let out a sob, trying hard not to look back
A hand clutches my shoulder,I look up at staring into your hardened eyes
Blood spills from your hand,Reaching down I press my lips to your palm..
A laugh that seemed so far away poured from your mouth...
Smiling..you threw the remains of my heart into my face
I crumbled into a thousand blackened pieces and fell beneathe your feet
Wiping the blood off your hands, you turn to walk away..and never look back [comments] => 5 [counter] => 159 [topic] => 48 [informant] => emocutie07 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

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Contributed by emocutie07 on Tuesday, 28th September 2004 @ 06:01:04 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Tears streaking silently down your cheek, left me numb and unable to speak
My heart crumbles into a thousand blackend pieces and fall at your feet
Head down choking back tears I turn and walk away...
Footsteps pouding behind me.. I let out a sob, trying hard not to look back
A hand clutches my shoulder,I look up at staring into your hardened eyes
Blood spills from your hand,Reaching down I press my lips to your palm..
A laugh that seemed so far away poured from your mouth...
Smiling..you threw the remains of my heart into my face
I crumbled into a thousand blackened pieces and fell beneathe your feet
Wiping the blood off your hands, you turn to walk away..and never look back

Copyright © emocutie07 ... [ 2004-09-28 18:01:04]
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Re: Untitled (User Rating: 1 )
by xafflictedx on Tuesday, 28th September 2004 @ 08:16:50 PM AEST
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Umm...I hope you weren't hurt this bad. Very well thought out however. A good title might be something like,
"When Beating Hearts Cease"
or
"Malevolent Fortunes"
or something simple like
"Heartless"

Re: Untitled (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 28th September 2004 @ 11:27:01 PM AEST
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Very good write, perhaps "Crimson Tears"?

Re: Untitled (User Rating: 1 )
by holderofthestone on Wednesday, 29th September 2004 @ 07:35:09 PM AEST
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"Smiling..you threw the remains of my heart into my face
I crumbled into a thousand blackened pieces and fell beneathe your feet" I really liked these lines here. they are strong and emotional, yet very personal. a strong write. A+++

Re: Untitled (User Rating: 1 )
by Deleterious_Dislike on Tuesday, 2nd November 2004 @ 08:09:25 AM AEST
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'A Thousand Blackened Pieces'

Beautiful..

Re: Untitled (User Rating: 1 )
by deadreckoning1983 on Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 11:29:21 PM AEST
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personally i like Judas as a refrence of how he turned his back and looked away from the damage he had done. anyway excellent write. BTW don't listen to afflicted, "When Beating Hearts Cease" is an old song title from our band, great poem here!!!!!!!!

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