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Array ( [sid] => 65375 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => With You [time] => 2004-09-27 21:04:02 [hometext] => With Nothing to Say, I Leave You to Read. [bodytext] => With You

I'm being torn by you
Faith has fallen through
No reason to believe
The lies you tell me
When they just drown
Me all the more
In the unseen tears
Cried for you

Compassion is the light
In someone's life
Or the very darkness
Because of it
And the light's burned out
Because it drowned in sadness

Sometimes I wonder why I stay
I'll never end up with you anyway
Never going to be anything to you
I'll never matter no matter what I do
I'm torn in two because of you

I'm broken
From my decision
To stay or leave
I'll drown in tears
Either way
Because of me [comments] => 8 [counter] => 194 [topic] => 48 [informant] => Essentially9 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 25 [ratings] => 5 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

With You

Contributed by Essentially9 on Monday, 27th September 2004 @ 09:04:02 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

With You

I'm being torn by you
Faith has fallen through
No reason to believe
The lies you tell me
When they just drown
Me all the more
In the unseen tears
Cried for you

Compassion is the light
In someone's life
Or the very darkness
Because of it
And the light's burned out
Because it drowned in sadness

Sometimes I wonder why I stay
I'll never end up with you anyway
Never going to be anything to you
I'll never matter no matter what I do
I'm torn in two because of you

I'm broken
From my decision
To stay or leave
I'll drown in tears
Either way
Because of me

Copyright © Essentially9 ... [ 2004-09-27 21:04:02]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: With You (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Monday, 27th September 2004 @ 09:15:07 PM AEST
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awwwww..... so sad... though even through the tears youve cried youve penned something very beautiful, very moving and heartfelt touching, best wishes to you, hugs n' love nessa

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Re: With You (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 27th September 2004 @ 09:22:48 PM AEST
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I concur with nessa. This was beautiful and moving.
Very sad, but wonderfully written. I hope all goes well for you.

~Breezy

Re: With You (User Rating: 1 )
by Jeanetta on Monday, 27th September 2004 @ 09:41:56 PM AEST
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I'm broken
"From my decision
To stay or leave
I'll drown in tears
Either way
Because of me"

my life mirrors these very words to this day. u must have been in my mind...or maybe it is that there are many more of us in the same boat....regardless....it still hurts.

Re: With You (User Rating: 1 )
by free2you on Monday, 27th September 2004 @ 10:27:03 PM AEST
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How can compassion be darkness... compassion should always be a good thing. I love your poetry..it always leaves me thinking...

Re: With You (User Rating: 1 )
by inoc on Tuesday, 28th September 2004 @ 03:12:35 AM AEST
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oh this poem is written well
yet I feel so sorry for you
your so sad
hang in there ok?

cheers!~

Re: With You (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Tuesday, 28th September 2004 @ 04:08:50 AM AEST
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This is very sad. But there is also the hidden hope that true love will be found. Good write

Re: With You (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Tuesday, 28th September 2004 @ 06:33:37 AM AEST
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such a powerfully written moving and emotional write, the worlds will no doubt move your readers..

takecare

pixie xx

Re: With You (User Rating: 1 )
by FleurdeSang on Tuesday, 28th September 2004 @ 05:17:04 PM AEST
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Essentially9, you always take the time in reading my work, so I am giong to give back the kindness now. This work was utterly beautiful! Saddening, reminiscent of a love once had... I know this feeling very well. Truly magnificent in every way possible! The flow was wonderful, and the ride all in all, was refreshing. I thank you for sharing this masterpiece with us, and always commenting beautifully on my work! All my love!

Fleur de Sang*

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