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Array ( [sid] => 65342 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => To Die For A Loved One [time] => 2004-09-27 15:43:00 [hometext] => Another impromptu poem...Kinda wierd, maybe someone will like it...comments appreciated [bodytext] => Hearing the crack
As the pistol in his hand
Fires a speeding bullet toward
The only one you've ever loved
Take off at break-neck speed
You have to get between that bullet and her
You are two feet away and you leap
The bullet rushes by your side
And hits her in the chest
You stare through flooded eyes
Rush to her side
Hold her close
Praying to God
That you can swich places with her
Her eyes flutter open
As you fall backward
She's crying now
But at least she is alive [comments] => 1 [counter] => 157 [topic] => 13 [informant] => eyesxcriedxout1989 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

To Die For A Loved One

Contributed by eyesxcriedxout1989 on Monday, 27th September 2004 @ 03:43:00 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Hearing the crack
As the pistol in his hand
Fires a speeding bullet toward
The only one you've ever loved
Take off at break-neck speed
You have to get between that bullet and her
You are two feet away and you leap
The bullet rushes by your side
And hits her in the chest
You stare through flooded eyes
Rush to her side
Hold her close
Praying to God
That you can swich places with her
Her eyes flutter open
As you fall backward
She's crying now
But at least she is alive

Copyright © eyesxcriedxout1989 ... [ 2004-09-27 15:43:00]
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Re: To Die For A Loved One (User Rating: 1 )
by deadreckoning1983 on Tuesday, 28th September 2004 @ 12:40:34 AM AEST
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that was awesome for the simple fact that i really thought she was going to die. whew what a relief. this was very good.

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