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Array ( [sid] => 65165 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => GET AWAY! (from me) [time] => 2004-09-25 23:28:12 [hometext] => please comment. thx. [bodytext] => I've been so cold and empty,
Everything's been cold and empty,
Ever since you left me,
Everything's changed,
Since you haven't been around as much lately,

But I'm learning to deal with it,
I'm going through this whole bit,
Now it's your throat I'd like to slit,
For it is my anger you have just lit,

So get away,
Just give me my space,
Please, just go,
Because the pain always somehow comes down to you,
But I've kept it in for so long,
Now you have to know,
That I've finally let you go,
So, GET AWAY from me! [comments] => 4 [counter] => 162 [topic] => 6 [informant] => yesi [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )

GET AWAY! (from me)

Contributed by yesi on Saturday, 25th September 2004 @ 11:28:12 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

I've been so cold and empty,
Everything's been cold and empty,
Ever since you left me,
Everything's changed,
Since you haven't been around as much lately,

But I'm learning to deal with it,
I'm going through this whole bit,
Now it's your throat I'd like to slit,
For it is my anger you have just lit,

So get away,
Just give me my space,
Please, just go,
Because the pain always somehow comes down to you,
But I've kept it in for so long,
Now you have to know,
That I've finally let you go,
So, GET AWAY from me!

Copyright © yesi ... [ 2004-09-25 23:28:12]
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Re: GET AWAY! (from me) (User Rating: 1 )
by tractorbabe on Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 12:35:23 AM AEST
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i love this poem. very well ritten

Re: GET AWAY! (from me) (User Rating: 1 )
by veenu on Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 04:02:44 AM AEST
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if it is real what u have writen than my dear same here a girl can u think a girl to whom i perposed left me for nothing....................
now nothing is cool for me always i think of her well nice poem but how to forget to whom we love...................if u got how to forget than plz................tell me
naveen..............or veenu

Re: GET AWAY! (from me) (User Rating: 1 )
by apcfan on Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 02:12:20 PM AEST
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Awesome. Good write.

Re: GET AWAY! (from me) (User Rating: 1 )
by a_bear on Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 03:55:01 PM AEST
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funny how fast things can go from "I love you" to I want to slit your throat" isn't it...LOL great capture of feelings.

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