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The Gray Women's happiness is a diffusion
He would fight Medusa's twilight acoustics
With Pallas Athena's black country blue sticks

The Hyperboreans of the North Wind
Granted three gifts to their courageous friend:
Winged sandals, magic wallet, cap of invisibility

So he went on to where her smoothe glass eye is wintery
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Wintery Smoothe Glass Eye

Contributed by Lee on Friday, 24th September 2004 @ 10:05:29 PM in AEST
Topic: mythology

Perseus is no illusion
The Gray Women's happiness is a diffusion
He would fight Medusa's twilight acoustics
With Pallas Athena's black country blue sticks

The Hyperboreans of the North Wind
Granted three gifts to their courageous friend:
Winged sandals, magic wallet, cap of invisibility

So he went on to where her smoothe glass eye is wintery
And he took her head from her abominated torso most slithery

Copyright © Lee ... [ 2004-09-24 22:05:29]
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Re: Wintery Smoothe Glass Eye (User Rating: 1 )
by Kindredblood_dragon on Friday, 24th September 2004 @ 10:48:42 PM AEST
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interesting poem, written like story yet with the rythem of a poem, awesome reading thank you for sharing.

Re: Wintery Smoothe Glass Eye (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 25th September 2004 @ 08:50:05 AM AEST
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This is so different a really enjoyable read.
I remember reading about perseus was she the one born of the sea foam? or have i got it wrong again!
nice writing.

wildejohnny.

Re: Wintery Smoothe Glass Eye (User Rating: 1 )
by Lee on Saturday, 25th September 2004 @ 09:10:30 AM AEST
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The Surreal eeL y'know Feel
of Sandman's Teal Coat Spiel says:

Mr. Wildejohnny, Perseus was the man who slayed Medusa, the creature with them snakey things on her head because she didn't shampoo. She could turn men in to stone just by them gazing in to her eyes, sounds kinda ancient as well as similar to the post-modern era as well, dudn't it?

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