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Can we please go back to the days when our love was true?
The fun times we had are vivid in my mind
Why can't we still have nights of this kind?
I cry everynight, I cry myself to sleep
and then I start another day when my alarm clock beeps
A new day I dread, because I want the past-
the way things used to be, man...time flew fast
The fact that we are friends is the only thing that keeps me sane
That, and the many trips down memory lane
I try not to think about it, and try to remember that we're just friends,
But thoughts and memories just run through my head
But, its not my all my fault, its partly yours too...
You got me attached when you kissed me and said "I love you"
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You

Contributed by VonDutchChick08 on Friday, 24th September 2004 @ 03:29:53 PM in AEST
Topic: LoveRemembered

I sit here, staring at the stars thinking of you
Can we please go back to the days when our love was true?
The fun times we had are vivid in my mind
Why can't we still have nights of this kind?
I cry everynight, I cry myself to sleep
and then I start another day when my alarm clock beeps
A new day I dread, because I want the past-
the way things used to be, man...time flew fast
The fact that we are friends is the only thing that keeps me sane
That, and the many trips down memory lane
I try not to think about it, and try to remember that we're just friends,
But thoughts and memories just run through my head
But, its not my all my fault, its partly yours too...
You got me attached when you kissed me and said "I love you"

Copyright © VonDutchChick08 ... [ 2004-09-24 15:29:53]
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Re: You (User Rating: 1 )
by Overstated on Friday, 24th September 2004 @ 04:55:31 PM AEST
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a smart piece yet so mellon collie - I really enjoyed reading this - you have a gift..

Re: You (User Rating: 1 )
by fastpitchqt on Thursday, 30th September 2004 @ 06:46:38 PM AEST
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nice write!! I cry myself to sleep..but in my situation...we arent friends anymore..we havent talked in awhile...and he never did say i love u...even tho I knew he did!! But all the same...awesomew rite!!

Re: You (User Rating: 1 )
by Trisha on Saturday, 9th October 2004 @ 01:35:13 AM AEST
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I know how you feel because I waited about a year for my love to see what he has. Then when I was about to give up he come back to me. I am still with him and if he brokes up with me tomorrow I wont cry because I know he'll come back to me. I know he loves me enough he wont stay away from me to long

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