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Array ( [sid] => 64979 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => a walk to remember [time] => 2004-09-24 07:59:32 [hometext] => i wrote this about the day my love came back into my life [bodytext] => a walk to remember,
near the end of december,

quiet once again,
waiting for this man,
anticipating his eyes,
wanting the suprise,
cant live without him,
i wanna know more about him,
i will never doubt him,
when he looked at me today,
he sounded just the same,

as he had years before,
will he recognize me anymore?
or could he just pass me in the store?
will i know him anymore,
are things changed since the past,
were his intentions vast?
he is here finnally at last,
take a deep breathe!no a gasp,
run out the door fast,
like a kid late for class,
look there he is on the bench,
i wonder if he loves me ?just a pinch!
i love him completely every inch,
i see him and smile,
run and give him this kiss,
so long has been missed,
it has been so long since we talked all night long,
so we took a walk into the woods,
singing loves sweet song,
nothings wrong,
everythings the same no one here was to blame,
he said close your eyes i have a suprise
he placed there a ring and my soul did sing in december,
this is a walk to be remembered. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 343 [topic] => 9 [informant] => blackholesun [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AnniversaryPoems )
a walk to remember

Contributed by blackholesun on Friday, 24th September 2004 @ 07:59:32 AM in AEST
Topic: AnniversaryPoems



a walk to remember,
near the end of december,

quiet once again,
waiting for this man,
anticipating his eyes,
wanting the suprise,
cant live without him,
i wanna know more about him,
i will never doubt him,
when he looked at me today,
he sounded just the same,

as he had years before,
will he recognize me anymore?
or could he just pass me in the store?
will i know him anymore,
are things changed since the past,
were his intentions vast?
he is here finnally at last,
take a deep breathe!no a gasp,
run out the door fast,
like a kid late for class,
look there he is on the bench,
i wonder if he loves me ?just a pinch!
i love him completely every inch,
i see him and smile,
run and give him this kiss,
so long has been missed,
it has been so long since we talked all night long,
so we took a walk into the woods,
singing loves sweet song,
nothings wrong,
everythings the same no one here was to blame,
he said close your eyes i have a suprise
he placed there a ring and my soul did sing in december,
this is a walk to be remembered.




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Re: a walk to remember (User Rating: 1 )
by Kindredblood_dragon on Friday, 24th September 2004 @ 08:07:02 AM AEST
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beautiful poem written with such inner passion, thanks for sharing one of your private memories.
Take care always


Re: a walk to remember (User Rating: 1 )
by MickeyPigKnuckles on Friday, 24th September 2004 @ 08:08:27 AM AEST
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Truly a great complete story composed into a lovely poem by a wonderful poet. I want to Thank You for sharing yourself and especially your poetry with allof us. Please have a peek at some of mine and leave a message. Your reading fan MickeyPigKnuckles :o)


Re: a walk to remember (User Rating: 1 )
by deadheadpoet on Friday, 24th September 2004 @ 08:22:46 AM AEST
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Lovely story. Anticipating is half the fun! This was really nice Brit. Much peace, Laura


Re: a walk to remember (User Rating: 1 )
by xAnaBananax on Friday, 18th March 2005 @ 10:11:05 PM AEST
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aww..i love ur poem.




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