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Sun and Rain
Contributed by
brew
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Thursday, 23rd September 2004 @ 05:44:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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Sunshine and rain.......makes all for that releases pain
The rays, of the beauty of its heat
makes you and the one to keep
Rain can make a wisheful sought
Of the clounds and thunder and all its might
Standing and wishing, and know that all is near
But can , make one.......wish they could disappear
They long for the touch and feel of this
And all the things, we will make a wish
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brew
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2004-09-23 17:44:14]
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Re: Sun and Rain
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by BrandySwanson on
Thursday, 23rd September 2004 @ 09:15:11 PM AEST
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nicely written with only just a few words great job
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Re: Sun and Rain
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by AspenGlow on
Friday, 24th September 2004 @ 09:06:12 AM AEST
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yes make wishes and wishes, Makes the time pass so nicely.
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