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Array ( [sid] => 64794 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => You're Killing Me [time] => 2004-09-22 21:12:06 [hometext] => This is for Bill, my friend who won't stop cutting. He doesn't understand that I've been through it and know how emotionally painful it is and how it can be for the people who care for you. [bodytext] => You're killing me
So slowly
So deadly
These blades
They're killing me
So mercilessly
You're killing me
How can I breathe,
When you don't want to live?
Let me see again
My vision has been blurred
For far too long
My voice isn't strong yet
But I'm screaming as loud as I ***** can
My knees are weak still
But I'm standing as tall as I can ***** bare

Please...
I'm down at your feet
Breathe life into me
I want to give you something to live for
Remove this dagger
From my chest
Remove those blades
From your flesh
Live
Live
Let me breathe
I'm begging you
Down at your feet [comments] => 2 [counter] => 140 [topic] => 55 [informant] => iluvpencils [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => dedicatedpoems )

You're Killing Me

Contributed by iluvpencils on Wednesday, 22nd September 2004 @ 09:12:06 PM in AEST
Topic: dedicatedpoems

You're killing me
So slowly
So deadly
These blades
They're killing me
So mercilessly
You're killing me
How can I breathe,
When you don't want to live?
Let me see again
My vision has been blurred
For far too long
My voice isn't strong yet
But I'm screaming as loud as I ***** can
My knees are weak still
But I'm standing as tall as I can ***** bare

Please...
I'm down at your feet
Breathe life into me
I want to give you something to live for
Remove this dagger
From my chest
Remove those blades
From your flesh
Live
Live
Let me breathe
I'm begging you
Down at your feet

Copyright © iluvpencils ... [ 2004-09-22 21:12:06]
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Re: You're Killing Me (User Rating: 1 )
by BEE on Friday, 21st April 2006 @ 11:43:18 AM AEST
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Poem is very good!! i like tht your wrote it for a friend its very deep..

PS COMMENT ON SOME OF MY POEMS

Re: You're Killing Me (User Rating: 1 )
by midnight_writer on Wednesday, 12th July 2006 @ 04:00:59 PM AEST
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love it. i love how it's killing you, but your friend is the one feeling the pain and cutting. i love how everytime they hurt, you hurt. true friendship...love it

x-Midnight~Amaya-x

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