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Death Welcoming
Contributed by
aallmmhh
on
Wednesday, 22nd September 2004 @ 05:27:37 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Im tired of making lame excused
As to why I feel completely worthless
I ask myself what the use is
Take my life, do what you choose with it.
If I were to leave
Cut my arms, Just let me bleed
Relieve my from my awful need
Please dont stop, just kill me.
Death, it welcomes me
As I pray so heavenly
For eternal rescuing
From all hurt and pressuring.
And if I were to choose to die,
Id sit and watch my life go by
Sit in a corner, wish and cry
You would have said "I love you, I lied"
Severed soul, sad too long
Maybe you will love me, once im gone
But if you really cared at all,
you would have been here with me,
Not watching me fall.
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2004-09-22 17:27:37]
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Re: Death Welcoming
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 22nd September 2004 @ 08:41:17 PM AEST
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| amazing, dark, powerful, and emotional write. i write many writes similar to this and about completely everything you did. you wouldnt feel so worthless if you had a goal or felt needed. but both those things blow up in your face like everything else in life...heh. |
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