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Array ( [sid] => 64704 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => You win [time] => 2004-09-22 08:51:14 [hometext] => the torture yourself gives you is the most painful sometimes..... [bodytext] => don't cut me any deeper
stitches already will not work
the blood just seeps all over
everything white, now red

don't tear my heart again
a million peices already scattered
the red slivers lie all over
every floor now stained

don't stab me anymore
the pain i cannot bare
the knife has had enough
even the handle is now soaked

i can't take it anymore
this love will never last
you cannot hold onto the one
you've hated all along

this is not about a guy
this is not about lost loves
this is all about myself
because myself will not let go

myself won't let me be
she screams and knocks me down
she won't let me know joy
and all she knows is hurt

she loves to cause my pain
she dances when i cry
she laughs aloud for all to hear
when i'm ready and willing to die

now there's only one way out
one way to abandon the strife
i must die and let her live
for she'll never give herself up

so as i take my one last breath
i'll say a few more words:
farewell to all
and noone cry
for i will be set free [comments] => 4 [counter] => 182 [topic] => 36 [informant] => purplestary [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 12 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

You win

Contributed by purplestary on Wednesday, 22nd September 2004 @ 08:51:14 AM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

don't cut me any deeper
stitches already will not work
the blood just seeps all over
everything white, now red

don't tear my heart again
a million peices already scattered
the red slivers lie all over
every floor now stained

don't stab me anymore
the pain i cannot bare
the knife has had enough
even the handle is now soaked

i can't take it anymore
this love will never last
you cannot hold onto the one
you've hated all along

this is not about a guy
this is not about lost loves
this is all about myself
because myself will not let go

myself won't let me be
she screams and knocks me down
she won't let me know joy
and all she knows is hurt

she loves to cause my pain
she dances when i cry
she laughs aloud for all to hear
when i'm ready and willing to die

now there's only one way out
one way to abandon the strife
i must die and let her live
for she'll never give herself up

so as i take my one last breath
i'll say a few more words:
farewell to all
and noone cry
for i will be set free

Copyright © purplestary ... [ 2004-09-22 08:51:14]
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Re: You win (User Rating: 1 )
by Kindredblood_dragon on Wednesday, 22nd September 2004 @ 09:21:59 AM AEST
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A sad write, such vivid emotions, a sound rythem to the poem, all in all a good write,

Re: You win (User Rating: 1 )
by Stitch on Wednesday, 22nd September 2004 @ 09:59:59 AM AEST
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This feeling is so individual and universal at the same time. It is the struggle between the spiritual and the sinful. It is epic and it is minute. You have described it well.
Stitch

Re: You win (User Rating: 1 )
by Sirena_Degana on Wednesday, 22nd September 2004 @ 10:24:53 AM AEST
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very unique..great write....i feel the pain in this....so unruly.
blessed be
sirena

Re: You win (User Rating: 1 )
by lostinmyself on Wednesday, 22nd September 2004 @ 11:50:30 AM AEST
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It's all so true...you can be your own worst enemy sometimes, I know I can.
Such a sad write, But please don't do anything, ok?
You have described how it feels very well.
*hugs*
Phil xxx

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