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Why'd they echo? Wh do I always fail?
Contributed by
deathdrop
on
Monday, 20th September 2004 @ 10:58:16 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Youre dis-missed from class.
You walk out with every one else.
Youre feeling numb.
Twisted.
Youre feeling broken.
You dont know why.
You dont under stand any thing any more
Youre surrounding by so much noise.
Youre starting to get over whelmed.
You turn around quickly.
Every ones faces are laughing,
Talking.
Echoing
Why cant they stop?
Some are screaming,
You feel so dead inside.
Why are they doing it?
People are pushing into the back of you.
You skid forward a little,
You let them pass,
Some are smiling at you.
I feel angry, but youre too low to retaliate.
They think that theyre the best,
So THEY have to get there first.
You let more of them past.
It doesnt bother you weather or not youre the first get there last
Provided you just get there.
Some one talks than every one else.
You shiver.
Your feeling cold.
Tired
Sleepy
You turn the corner,
Then make your way up the stairs with every one else.
There are heavy foot steps all around you.
The different volumes begin to echo like thunder.
You hear sirs voice behind you.
Far behind,
But getting nearer.
You feel a little safer,
Yet
You feel consumed.
Picked away at.
You want to scream.
You dont.
So instead
Instead you continue,
Walking silently,
All alone.
Knowing that.
Theyve got you and they not even trying
YOURE PATHETIC!
And you no it
You turn again after the 1st flight of stairs.
And youre there.
And you await your dreaded B.S. test,
That you know youre gonna fail in,
Because
YOU ONLY KNOW HOW TO FAIL!
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deathdrop
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2004-09-20 10:58:16]
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Re: Why'd they echo? Wh do I always fail?
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by a_bear on
Monday, 20th September 2004 @ 11:17:49 AM AEST
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| by the time I got the end I felt suffocated...hoping you don't really feel this way...because your writing ability is far from failure...mary |
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