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Array ( [sid] => 64002 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Let Me Move On [time] => 2004-09-16 18:00:45 [hometext] => ...Don't you hate it when ex's say the things they know will make you melt?... [bodytext] => All I can think of
You've invaded my mind
Taken control
Other thoughts left behind
Did you want that to happen?
Honey, I'm begging you, please
Let my heart move on
Help me up off my knees
I want to move on
So you can be happy
So you can love only her
Instead ofbeing, with me, sappy
Don't get me wrong
I love it, it's true
But I want you happy with her
Because I love you
So get out of my mind
Out of my thoughts
So you won't spend your time
With dual loves making you distrought [comments] => 5 [counter] => 178 [topic] => 22 [informant] => Kie-Kie [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 8 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

Let Me Move On

Contributed by Kie-Kie on Thursday, 16th September 2004 @ 06:00:45 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

All I can think of
You've invaded my mind
Taken control
Other thoughts left behind
Did you want that to happen?
Honey, I'm begging you, please
Let my heart move on
Help me up off my knees
I want to move on
So you can be happy
So you can love only her
Instead ofbeing, with me, sappy
Don't get me wrong
I love it, it's true
But I want you happy with her
Because I love you
So get out of my mind
Out of my thoughts
So you won't spend your time
With dual loves making you distrought

Copyright © Kie-Kie ... [ 2004-09-16 18:00:45]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Let Me Move On (User Rating: 1 )
by afterdark on Thursday, 16th September 2004 @ 06:06:59 PM AEST
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Very very good poem here..I am glad I read it..

Afterdark..

Re: Let Me Move On (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Thursday, 16th September 2004 @ 06:18:50 PM AEST
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Very good writing!
luv, huggs,
emy

Re: Let Me Move On (User Rating: 1 )
by Solnubis on Thursday, 16th September 2004 @ 09:01:11 PM AEST
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Well written.

Re: Let Me Move On (User Rating: 1 )
by fastpitchqt on Thursday, 16th September 2004 @ 11:44:52 PM AEST
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nice poem...i liked it! Im kinda in that situation. I want to move on...but not because hes with someone new

Re: Let Me Move On (User Rating: 1 )
by Pyrofungus on Saturday, 25th September 2004 @ 12:21:03 PM AEST
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omg I'm so glad I found this poem...reading this expressed everything that I'm feeling towards my ex! wow...I'm stunned right now...I want him to be happy with her so he'll be happy even though i'll be miserable for awhile, but I will move on...I was moving on even thought I was missing him like hell...then he started calling me again...and all this ***** went down....life sucks and it hurts to know he still likes her!
great poem!

please comment on my work too
summer

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