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I need to get away from this sky

I can smell the aroma from indoors
waiting now by one of the front doors

it opens with a wide swing
I burst inside like a crazy thing

darting around the room I try
to find a way to that aroma I fly

hitting the wall, window, and the fluro light
getting dizzy from this awsome flight

finally I find that scent like a magnet
I buzz to it but there's a net on it!

I search for a opening for me to crawl in
not quick enough I'm squashed and buried in the bin! [comments] => 5 [counter] => 144 [topic] => 21 [informant] => inoc [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 14 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )

Uninvited Guest

Contributed by inoc on Thursday, 16th September 2004 @ 08:31:27 AM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

It's hot out here I am so high
I need to get away from this sky

I can smell the aroma from indoors
waiting now by one of the front doors

it opens with a wide swing
I burst inside like a crazy thing

darting around the room I try
to find a way to that aroma I fly

hitting the wall, window, and the fluro light
getting dizzy from this awsome flight

finally I find that scent like a magnet
I buzz to it but there's a net on it!

I search for a opening for me to crawl in
not quick enough I'm squashed and buried in the bin!

Copyright © inoc ... [ 2004-09-16 08:31:27]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Uninvited Guest (User Rating: 1 )
by Bruce on Thursday, 16th September 2004 @ 08:40:17 AM AEST
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what can I say but good luck. nice write

Re: Uninvited Guest (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Thursday, 16th September 2004 @ 08:42:29 AM AEST
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good write Inoc :)

pixie xx

Re: Uninvited Guest (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 16th September 2004 @ 08:42:38 AM AEST
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Sounds like a few picnics I have been on. This is hilarious. You have a great sense of wit!

Rita

Re: Uninvited Guest (User Rating: 1 )
by Stitch on Thursday, 16th September 2004 @ 09:19:12 AM AEST
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Like an open soda can for a hornet!
Stitch

Re: Uninvited Guest (User Rating: 1 )
by WinterFawn on Saturday, 18th September 2004 @ 07:40:48 AM AEST
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lol..what a creative poem!...thanks for the giggles...awesomely hilarious!

WinterFawn

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