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You're Really Breaking Me Up Now...!
Contributed by
deathdrop
on
Wednesday, 15th September 2004 @ 11:52:06 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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When I snapped at you before.
You just smiled into my face.
And when I flipped a little more.
You grinned then walked away.
All that tension,
Had been building up.
Just the courage,
To let you know that its enough!
But you played with my irritation,
With you twisted little grin.
Pushed me far beyond frustration.
Coz when I was abused, thats the smile you did!
I really HATE you!
But I wont fight back again.
Coz I just break every time,
When youre the one that still wins
Gusts of tears,
Are now falling down.
Ive put my hood up,
To hide my frown.
Mums backing you up.
Saying its a really kind thing youve done
And Im just breaking down.
Because youre the one thats won.
Youve got me emotionally,
Where it really stings!
And theres nothing I can do to stop you,
Or the pain you bring.
Unless I was to fight back.
But only to break more at the end of the day.
Because you can really snap me up,
With those inconsiderate words you say
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deathdrop
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2004-09-15 11:52:06]
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Re: You're Really Breaking Me Up Now...!
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by Overstated on
Saturday, 18th September 2004 @ 05:47:14 AM AEST
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| I thought the last three stanzas were very well written - well done to you!!! |
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