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[title] => whispering benches
[time] => 2004-09-13 22:58:43
[hometext] => pray that your loneliness may spur you into finding something to live for, great enough to die for. ~dag hammarskjold
[bodytext] =>
he took me there so long ago,
before our hearts knew winds would blow;
away the love we had to share,
windows of night opened for air,
remembering long ago kisses; pure bliss,
back in the day when we were young;
and to one another clung,
oh, so many seasons passed;
it is true nothing ever lasts?
mayhap it be; destiny was cast,
alas, i wrote of our candlelight flames,
softly into the universe; whispered his name,
wondering; is he still there?
if only all the trees could talk,
as along this life we walked; for
quietly breathing soft bittersweet sighs,
everynight as sure as a goodbye,
for on those magical benches we whispered,
before our hearts knew winds would blow;
back in the time when he was my beau,
so many seasons have gone by;
dare we now, breathe happy sighs?
turns out the limit is the sky.
oh, to meet in fairemount park,
kiss the years away within' the dark,
for upon each soul still lives a spark...
§* *§
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whispering benches
Contributed by
ladyfawn
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Monday, 13th September 2004 @ 10:58:43 PM in AEST
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he took me there so long ago,
before our hearts knew winds would blow;
away the love we had to share,
windows of night opened for air,
remembering long ago kisses; pure bliss,
back in the day when we were young;
and to one another clung,
oh, so many seasons passed;
it is true nothing ever lasts?
mayhap it be; destiny was cast,
alas, i wrote of our candlelight flames,
softly into the universe; whispered his name,
wondering; is he still there?
if only all the trees could talk,
as along this life we walked; for
quietly breathing soft bittersweet sighs,
everynight as sure as a goodbye,
for on those magical benches we whispered,
before our hearts knew winds would blow;
back in the time when he was my beau,
so many seasons have gone by;
dare we now, breathe happy sighs?
turns out the limit is the sky.
oh, to meet in fairemount park,
kiss the years away within' the dark,
for upon each soul still lives a spark...
§* *§
*|*
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Re: whispering benches
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by shelby on
Monday, 13th September 2004 @ 11:21:44 PM AEST
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Nessa words wont do this justice Im in awe once again so delicate romantic full of longing and joys of a love that belonged to you soooooo true those petals never fade dear friend
Hugs Michelle |
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by emystar on
Monday, 13th September 2004 @ 11:32:05 PM AEST
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Very beautifull tho sad.
He will always be with u.
Great writing girl even tho I know u have much pain.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 13th September 2004 @ 11:37:56 PM AEST
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It so quickly starts feeling like he has been gone forever. I read this and tears fell from the ache for him and the love I still have and always will for him. I know you have the same aches within. This is a masterful piece. Thank you.
Much love,
Rita |
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by Silent_Composer on
Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 12:05:56 AM AEST
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Oh Lady of wonders, This is such an intense and emotion enhanced poem.
Romance of such powerful preportions, You are a masterful writer and I thank you for sharing such a beautiful talent.
~Silence~ |
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by Tanmaya on
Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 12:44:17 AM AEST
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Absolutely lovely write.
It's so tender and beautiful...
Very dreamy and yet real.
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Re: whispering benches
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by katyqueen35 on
Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 02:50:57 AM AEST
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AWWW SO SWEET AND SAD....
GOOD WRITE... |
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Re: whispering benches
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by WinterFawn on
Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 05:14:28 AM AEST
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for upon each soul still lives a spark..
I truly believe this ladyfawn...that love lives on within thoses two souls for eternity. This is so lovely.
WinterFawn |
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by venkat on
Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 06:59:08 AM AEST
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most poetical..absolutely beautiful poem..
hugs..venkat |
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by Bruce on
Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 09:07:01 AM AEST
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| another winner nessa, as always your poems are so beautiful |
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by pixie on
Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 11:09:50 AM AEST
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beautiful and a sad write, I loved it, I love all your writes, nice to see you on the site again *hugs*
pixie xx |
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by sweetangeluk on
Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 12:20:24 PM AEST
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A love so strong can never die inside your heart.
A beautiful yet sad poem made me cry
Love Sweetangelukxxxx |
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by theMoth on
Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 09:01:12 PM AEST
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Yeah, what everyone else said, and then some!
I like this, and it's unique, I think I would recognise this as one of yours. It has that quality and style.
Groovy.
--Mothy |
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by Alovinmann on
Wednesday, 15th September 2004 @ 12:11:13 PM AEST
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The benches still stand I have gone there alone to feel close to you and to sit in our home.....to talk to the power that brought you to me...... oh lord keep her safe as if in my arms and keep her so happy give her no harm....and if just by chance i see her again I know i'de make it right instead of pretend.
Kiss and thanks |
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by SocialMisfit on
Wednesday, 15th September 2004 @ 11:33:16 PM AEST
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very gental and romantic i like it alot u have alot of good poems so ty for sharing them.
SM
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by jaeann on
Thursday, 16th September 2004 @ 12:42:59 PM AEST
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| if only all the trees could talk......:) delicate smiles...... |
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 16th September 2004 @ 04:47:47 PM AEST
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beautiful.
wildejohnny. |
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by Jenni_K on
Thursday, 16th September 2004 @ 11:29:31 PM AEST
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Exquisite write....Miss you my pal...
Love, Hugs and Woofies
Jenni |
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by Rakerman1999 on
Friday, 17th September 2004 @ 07:13:00 AM AEST
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Strange how the hand of fate works isnt it nessa? Who can know the outcome of life or love. All I know is that unless we keep trying, we might pass by a dream come true. I wish you both great luck and happiness my friend. (((Nessa)))
Roses for my daisy
Larry ;o) |
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by Rakerman1999 on
Friday, 17th September 2004 @ 07:13:46 AM AEST
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| oops....forgot to tell you how absolutely beautiful this was ! |
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by lovingcritters on
Tuesday, 21st September 2004 @ 01:26:16 PM AEST
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Remembering can be such loving and lonely bliss.........I really enjoyed this poem Nessa, for I too sometimes long and get forlorn.....but the past is past.....and so I try to move on, but it's wonderful to hear the same benches that spoke for you, speak to me also. And the trees.........O" yes the trees.....so wish they to could speak.........Or, on second thought, best they can't........continue to love alot! This was so heartwrenchingly wonderful!
Consue |
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by Dorian on
Wednesday, 22nd September 2004 @ 05:15:45 PM AEST
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This is a master peice of writting i'm reading it and
watching my life pass me by at the same time, in
a word, divine . . . Dorian : ) hugs 2u |
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by emystar on
Saturday, 25th September 2004 @ 03:23:13 AM AEST
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Heavenly beautifull writing.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy |
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 25th September 2004 @ 01:41:41 PM AEST
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Exquisite nessa. What can I say that others have not? This poem has a melancholic
feel, but at the same time is so touching. I applaud your work. You write with such superb flair.
Admiringly
~Breezy |
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by Cynthia on
Tuesday, 28th September 2004 @ 11:29:53 AM AEST
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| Nessa, you have such a soft heart. Beautiful these words are. Stunningly beautiful. *S* Cynthia |
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by Merry on
Saturday, 18th December 2004 @ 11:45:25 AM AEST
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my dearest Nessa - this is truly beautiful and straight from the heart - and who knows what fate has in store when their are sparks to be renewed.
hugs sis
merry |
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by xrockstheheart on
Friday, 18th February 2005 @ 01:21:04 AM AEST
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| well, this is as good as poetry gets. You may carve your poetry anywhere, this one is absolutely incredible. outstanding ladyfawn |
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by Spazzo on
Friday, 17th February 2006 @ 02:30:03 PM AEST
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This is a really beautiful poem.
Take care.
Scott |
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by colinb on
Monday, 21st July 2014 @ 02:22:22 AM AEST
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