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midnite comes
Contributed by
Jeanetta
on
Monday, 13th September 2004 @ 12:08:03 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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midnite comes to me secretly
under the guise of something calm and serene
hidden in a quiet stillness
caressing my being into relaxation
as i place myself beneath the smooth cover of darkness
interrupted only by light that reflects my desire.
midnite comes to me
with kisses so soft tears fill my eyes
as i am enveloped with the meaning
behind each one.
with each heartbeat, the nite-flower blooms
as the heat begins to rise
in the coolness of midnite.
and i marvel at the storm caused
by our embrace.
midnite comes to me, skin so smooth
body formed beautifully by hands unseen.
each movement is poetry in motion.
each touch is music heard in the depths of my soul
as the sounds flutter across our existence
covering us as a glistening blanket.
each breath is life, whispering words
not meant to be heard.
midnite comes to me
beckoning to be recognized
calling out to my womanhood,
inviting her to partake...to answer.
and i came.
Copyright ©
Jeanetta
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2004-09-13 12:08:03]
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Re: midnite comes
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by a_bear on
Monday, 13th September 2004 @ 01:06:07 PM AEST
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| Poetry in motion...Jason asked me to comment on your poetry. you don't need any help. This is lovely.. I'd use an upper case M for the beginning line..Midnight.. maybe I'd use the word depth instead of depths...I'm not sure..but I think it's great the way it is...a 5. (mary) |
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