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Array ( [sid] => 63500 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => dad [time] => 2004-09-12 17:54:41 [hometext] => just another part of my messed up life [bodytext] => you think with your ******** and not with your heart
you let a woman tear us apart
under a spell, you made a choice
why didnt you listen to your brain, not her voice?
you haven't yet realized the decision you made
but jus wait until u don't wanna get laid
how can you just toss me aside?
i was your only family, your only daughter, your only pride.
is it because i remind you of true love? [comments] => 2 [counter] => 410 [topic] => 23 [informant] => nikkkkki [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 3 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => FamilyPoems )
dad

Contributed by nikkkkki on Sunday, 12th September 2004 @ 05:54:41 PM in AEST
Topic: FamilyPoems



you think with your ******** and not with your heart
you let a woman tear us apart
under a spell, you made a choice
why didnt you listen to your brain, not her voice?
you haven't yet realized the decision you made
but jus wait until u don't wanna get laid
how can you just toss me aside?
i was your only family, your only daughter, your only pride.
is it because i remind you of true love?




Copyright © nikkkkki ... [ 2004-09-12 17:54:41]
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Re: dad (User Rating: 1 )
by oxluvlaughingxo on Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 04:11:33 PM AEST
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wow. lots of emotion. don't know if its all appropriate but its really good.


Re: dad (User Rating: 1 )
by paigejacquelyn9 on Wednesday, 22nd March 2006 @ 06:15:55 PM AEST
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I liked this one. I can relate to it. Its good to find something to relate to




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