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[sid] => 63465
[catid] => 1
[aid] => mick
[title] => You DON’T ‘dobb’, in reality!
[time] => 2004-09-12 11:46:44
[hometext] => The lesson in here is really stupid! But, alas, it’s the rule! I don’t know what was going through my head when I wrote this… it just twists all the way through, but still makes sense, well, to me any way... PLEASE COMMENT!
[bodytext] => Look at this girl. All dead in dried blood. See how she’s nothing, But a girl bloodied with mud… There sits her tool, That she used for suicide. It remains as nothing more, Than a simple cutting knife. There are her finger prints, All over the floor. To prove she tried to stand, But fell down once more. But! Then there’s the cut, And the back of her head. And then there’s the dried blood, Still resting on her neck. Wait! This was no suicide. This was bloodied murder! So I asked the neighbors. Screams? Had you heard her? And their answer was yes, But we chose to ignore. Because she was never loved, And her life was all torn. We didn’t like her, WE WANTED HER OUT! But, she wouldn’t leave, So we sent the thugs round. I looked a the neighbors, A real shock of my face. Then they took out their guns, And shot with no dis-grace! Then one came forward, And said that’s for when you were gonna tell on us. NO ONE DOBB’S IN THE ‘REAL WORLD’ It’s just the rule, just ‘cuzz…. But then the thugs from the murder, Came skipping happily along. Saying “You’ve just told the audience!” And with that, they shot with THEIR guns… [comments] => 1 [counter] => 163 [topic] => 31 [informant] => deathdrop [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 3 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => StoryPoetry )
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