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Delivered in the moonlight
Sprinkled in love
And cooked in pain
She’s risen in a world
That loathes all its strains

She’s still my vacant girl
Maybe she’ll never rise
Maybe the stars will never swirl
But she’s perfect in my eyes

A fresh taste of sublime
A moment with her
Can never ever be described
But all I can see is a fracture

Deep cuts on the glass
This mirrors doused in cobwebs
Reflecting her past
Focusing on her debts

The murmurs of a lion
Raging in her soul
There’s one thing certain
Her past will never let her sweet mind go…
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And The Mirror Bled For Her

Contributed by Overstated on Saturday, 11th September 2004 @ 12:50:24 PM in AEST
Topic: PoemsonBeauty

Bright eyes is so misplaced
Delivered in the moonlight
Sprinkled in love
And cooked in pain
She’s risen in a world
That loathes all its strains

She’s still my vacant girl
Maybe she’ll never rise
Maybe the stars will never swirl
But she’s perfect in my eyes

A fresh taste of sublime
A moment with her
Can never ever be described
But all I can see is a fracture

Deep cuts on the glass
This mirrors doused in cobwebs
Reflecting her past
Focusing on her debts

The murmurs of a lion
Raging in her soul
There’s one thing certain
Her past will never let her sweet mind go…

Copyright Â© Overstated ... [ 2004-09-11 12:50:24]
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Re: And The Mirror Bled For Her (User Rating: 1 )
by Solnubis on Saturday, 11th September 2004 @ 01:14:47 PM AEST
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Very well written. Is this about a love that cannot be. Or wanting a love from someone you can not have? Just wondering?

Re: And The Mirror Bled For Her (User Rating: 1 )
by Overstated on Saturday, 11th September 2004 @ 01:22:39 PM AEST
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The protagonist is in love with the girl and is watching her life.

However; I wanted to hint that the protagonist was actually her – by using the idea of the mirror. Hence the girl will eventually get swallowed up by herself if that makes sense to you!

Re: And The Mirror Bled For Her (User Rating: 1 )
by deathdrop on Saturday, 11th September 2004 @ 02:02:29 PM AEST
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this is amazing!!!!
it's so deep thinking, taking in each and every detail!
its magnificent, despite the fact that it's also a very sad write.

Re: And The Mirror Bled For Her (User Rating: 1 )
by MoonlitAngel on Saturday, 11th September 2004 @ 02:29:22 PM AEST
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Wow. What I wouldn't do to have this exact poem written about me. It's beautiful. I love it. A lot. :)

~ Moonlit

Re: And The Mirror Bled For Her (User Rating: 1 )
by Bohemian_with_a_pen on Sunday, 12th September 2004 @ 12:37:30 AM AEST
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beautiful

Re: And The Mirror Bled For Her (User Rating: 1 )
by PumpkinPie on Monday, 13th September 2004 @ 11:10:45 PM AEST
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Even though her past haunts her still,this girl is strong,she stands still against past memories and doesn't let go.Beauty is still contained inside her.I think she'll be just fine..
PumpkinPie

Re: And The Mirror Bled For Her (User Rating: 1 )
by Kindredblood_dragon on Saturday, 25th September 2004 @ 08:20:19 AM AEST
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Awesome poem, I thought is was written well describing details to the letter, beautfiully done, cheers for sharing.

Re: And The Mirror Bled For Her (User Rating: 1 )
by NightOwl on Tuesday, 29th March 2005 @ 04:59:21 PM AEST
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Absolutely amazing... words cannot describe. Such emotion comes from it! Excellently done... perfect.

*~Erin~*

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