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Array ( [sid] => 63255 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => My Wish To Be Free [time] => 2004-09-10 12:20:50 [hometext] => I now feel srong enough to free myself from my fears..... [bodytext] => Babes I do try my best to explain,
To you my rambling must seem insane,
You come from another world,
I just feel like the weird, alien girl.

It feels like I am little Miss understood,
The way that I think I know is not good,
Negativity & self doubt surround me,
All I want to do is to feel free.

To be free of my fears is for what I wish,
I don’t want depression to be my only dish,
You & I should be so happy & full of joy,
Sometimes I feel like the devils toy.

I want for you to feel that you are loved,
I know that I tend to push & shove,
But I get so scared & don’t want to be hurt,
So I hide away under an angry shirt.

Over the 2 years things have been like a war,
So much has beaten down our door,
But we still stand strong regardless of the struggles,
We will make sense out all of these muddles.

I no longer want to feel all alone,
Need to rebuild the calcium in my bones,
My strength is slowly but surely returning,
Your love is easing my terrible burning.




[comments] => 5 [counter] => 170 [topic] => 48 [informant] => pixie [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )
My Wish To Be Free

Contributed by pixie on Friday, 10th September 2004 @ 12:20:50 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



Babes I do try my best to explain,
To you my rambling must seem insane,
You come from another world,
I just feel like the weird, alien girl.

It feels like I am little Miss understood,
The way that I think I know is not good,
Negativity & self doubt surround me,
All I want to do is to feel free.

To be free of my fears is for what I wish,
I don’t want depression to be my only dish,
You & I should be so happy & full of joy,
Sometimes I feel like the devils toy.

I want for you to feel that you are loved,
I know that I tend to push & shove,
But I get so scared & don’t want to be hurt,
So I hide away under an angry shirt.

Over the 2 years things have been like a war,
So much has beaten down our door,
But we still stand strong regardless of the struggles,
We will make sense out all of these muddles.

I no longer want to feel all alone,
Need to rebuild the calcium in my bones,
My strength is slowly but surely returning,
Your love is easing my terrible burning.








Copyright © pixie ... [ 2004-09-10 12:20:50]
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Re: My Wish To Be Free (User Rating: 1 )
by poetmarie on Friday, 10th September 2004 @ 12:27:28 PM AEST
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I really like this. I think it would make a good song. It's deep and has good rhthym.


Re: My Wish To Be Free (User Rating: 1 )
by slayer_015 on Friday, 10th September 2004 @ 12:40:14 PM AEST
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That is one beautiful poem you got there.
Great work.
Keep writing.
:)
:)
:)
Brian


Re: My Wish To Be Free (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 10th September 2004 @ 01:15:46 PM AEST
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Great post, Krissy. You will be free one day and life will be bright and full of love.

Rita


Re: My Wish To Be Free (User Rating: 1 )
by screwup on Friday, 10th September 2004 @ 04:39:34 PM AEST
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this was as always, a great and emotional write... I especially like the last line, it finishes the piece so well. Keep up the good work.
~screwup


Re: My Wish To Be Free (User Rating: 1 )
by reprobate on Friday, 10th September 2004 @ 05:07:31 PM AEST
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i agree with the song thought...it's got 'avril l.' written all over it!
thanks, as always, for sharing!




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