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[aid] => Mick
[title] => Contract of Suicide
[time] => 2002-11-07 06:00:00
[hometext] => i dont know why i wrote this poem i was angry with a teacher and this is just what came out of my heart!!!!!
[bodytext] => By my own hand I'll soon die,
this is my contract of suicide.
Blood seeps through and drips to the floor.
It wont be long, for I have opened the door.
It hurts a bit but I'll try to be brave,
I wont let people know that death wasnt what i craved.
I didnt cut deep enough and I dont get to die,
Im not sure if it matters, but I still wonder why?
Should I try to cut again, or maybe try something new??
A gun of pills could make my death wish come true.
I SIT STILL THINKING ABOUT ALL THE BAD THINGS THAT KEEP HAPPENING.....
Suddenly I grab the knife, I cut deep, and seconds later I realize what I have done.
Today I signed my suicide contract with my own blood!!
[comments] => 11
[counter] => 345
[topic] => 36
[informant] => Twinky
[notes] =>
[ihome] => 0
[alanguage] => english
[acomm] => 0
[haspoll] => 0
[pollID] => 0
[score] => 10
[ratings] => 2
[editpoem] => 1
[associated] =>
[topicname] => Suicide
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Contract of Suicide
Contributed by
Twinky
on
Thursday, 7th November 2002 @ 06:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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By my own hand I'll soon die,
this is my contract of suicide.
Blood seeps through and drips to the floor.
It wont be long, for I have opened the door.
It hurts a bit but I'll try to be brave,
I wont let people know that death wasnt what i craved.
I didnt cut deep enough and I dont get to die,
Im not sure if it matters, but I still wonder why?
Should I try to cut again, or maybe try something new??
A gun of pills could make my death wish come true.
I SIT STILL THINKING ABOUT ALL THE BAD THINGS THAT KEEP HAPPENING.....
Suddenly I grab the knife, I cut deep, and seconds later I realize what I have done.
Today I signed my suicide contract with my own blood!!
Copyright ©
Twinky
... [
2002-11-07 06:00:00]
(Date/Time posted on
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Re: Contract of Suicide
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by OreO on
Thursday, 7th November 2002 @ 06:15:34 AM AEST
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This was definately different
I enjoyed this
Keep em' coming
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::.
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Re: Contract of Suicide
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Thursday, 7th November 2002 @ 06:19:39 AM AEST
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WOW!! As a teacher, I hope no one ever thinks of me and write something like this... Hope you've gotten over your anger... Awesome write, tho..
Jenni |
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Re: Contract of Suicide
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by LOWMAN613 on
Thursday, 7th November 2002 @ 08:26:30 AM AEST
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| Wow this was such a deep peom! I hope your thoughts of suicide is over! Nothing is worth your own life! Best Of Luck! Christina |
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Re: Contract of Suicide
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by PlayItForward on
Thursday, 7th November 2002 @ 09:06:48 AM AEST
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| dude dont kill yourself, seriously. but if you do, try and go out with some class. Cutting is so passe. try a bungee jump/hanging, or jumping off the ski lift and rolling to death, or eat yourself to death. At least then it would taste good. but come on, there ARE things worth dieing for. But emotional stress is not one of them. Try freedom, or the right to vote or sompthin. sheesh. |
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Re: Contract of Suicide
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 9th November 2002 @ 01:56:40 AM AEST
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This poem is very cliche. It's sloppy like you rushed through it, maybe it stemmed from your silly motive. I've had absolutely awful teachers in my past but they could never make me more than frustrated. Why would you take that as far as to kill yourself? If you were really serious the cuts would be deep enough to die. This was just a cry for help and you'll get over it.
Count your blessings, and really listen to your heart before you pick up the pen. |
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Re: Contract of Suicide
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by Twinky on
Saturday, 9th November 2002 @ 03:45:44 AM AEST
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| ok well first of all i have a past history of suicidal behavior, i have been admitted 4 times for either slashing my wrists or trying to O.D. on pills to the hospital and my mom has tried to have me committed i wrote this poem because i was really upset at a teachers words, i cant help it if this is what came out this is just the way i was feeling, as i have already said though i wasnt writinthis saying that i was gonna try to kill myself again i was just expressing myself the best way i know how, all my poetry except one poem written for my mother is like this i mean i have to do something te vent cuz i have realized that i dont want to die and well it isnt easy for me to speak to people so i write down how i feel and almost everytime i feel the need to write it is because i am in a mood like this!!!!! |
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Re: Contract of Suicide
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by fancyface4898 on
Saturday, 9th November 2002 @ 04:01:41 AM AEST
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| I hope you have broke that contract. Suicide is definately not the answer it is a permanent solution to a temporary problem. You have to livce life to the fullest. Great write though |
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Re: Contract of Suicide
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by fancyface4898 on
Saturday, 9th November 2002 @ 04:05:22 AM AEST
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Well hun I am glad to hear that and I hope you have a full life. YOu sound like you have turned around and I have been there too. Good luck in staying strong.
Love and happiness be with you
Laura |
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Re: Contract of Suicide
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by Nazaholic on
Sunday, 10th November 2002 @ 12:49:17 PM AEST
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| this is defintely diffrent,something good came from something bad |
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Re: Contract of Suicide
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by Sandra on
Thursday, 14th November 2002 @ 10:15:44 AM AEST
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| Great poem!!! I understand completely where you are coming from. Keep up the good writings!! |
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Re: Contract of Suicide
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 5th September 2003 @ 07:57:17 PM AEST
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| Wonderful poem. I feel all the pain in your poem. I've signed my own contract many times before, even though I've cover them really well. Just remember we are all angel bright and beautiful. Your words are you power to show people your beauty as well as your pain keep writing and I will keep reading. I truly love your work. My heart would break If you did say goodbye forever. I'm hear if you need to talk. GOOSE |
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