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Array ( [sid] => 6308 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Changing the world [time] => 2002-11-06 15:30:00 [hometext] => This is personally my favorite of all my poems. [bodytext] => I wish to be free
Like a blowing breeze

Through the sky and through the trees
Lifting up the leaves and things

Changing the world with the strength it brings

I wish to be free like the ocean
With all it's life encircling me

my waves are my emotions
Sometimes high and sometimes low
but always beautiful

Changing the world with my emotions

I wish to be free like a bird
Flying high and seeing beautiful things

I would change the world with my wings

One of these days I will be as free as

A Blowing breeze

A wavy ocean

A Flying bird

and I will change the world. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 171 [topic] => 19 [informant] => KraZshyt [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => InspirationalPoems )

Changing the world

Contributed by KraZshyt on Wednesday, 6th November 2002 @ 03:30:00 PM in AEST
Topic: InspirationalPoems

I wish to be free
Like a blowing breeze

Through the sky and through the trees
Lifting up the leaves and things

Changing the world with the strength it brings

I wish to be free like the ocean
With all it's life encircling me

my waves are my emotions
Sometimes high and sometimes low
but always beautiful

Changing the world with my emotions

I wish to be free like a bird
Flying high and seeing beautiful things

I would change the world with my wings

One of these days I will be as free as

A Blowing breeze

A wavy ocean

A Flying bird

and I will change the world.

Copyright Â© KraZshyt ... [ 2002-11-06 15:30:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Changing the world (User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on Wednesday, 6th November 2002 @ 03:33:23 PM AEST
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Bravo!! This was beautiful
very heartfelt and inspiring
I enjoyed this alot
Keep em' coming
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::.

Re: Changing the world (User Rating: 1 )
by ShadowsCloud on Wednesday, 6th November 2002 @ 04:51:07 PM AEST
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Very inspiring. Great poem.
ShadowsCloud

Re: Changing the world (User Rating: 1 )
by lost_word on Friday, 8th November 2002 @ 02:47:39 PM AEST
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great write, very positive and uplifting

thanx

Re: Changing the world (User Rating: 1 )
by Baby_Blu-XTC on Saturday, 9th November 2002 @ 07:53:07 AM AEST
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very well done.

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