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Array ( [sid] => 62991 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Day I Nearly Lost You [time] => 2004-09-08 11:44:50 [hometext] => it was a very difficult time for the both of us....... [bodytext] => The day I nearly lost you,
You’re soul must have been shaded in blue,
I know how hard it is to walk away,
From someone you love more every day.

My heart sank right down to my feet,
Me & heartache were about to finally meet,
The pain surged around my veins,
Our love was flowing down the drains.

Thoughts of never hearing your laughter.
Made me feel unhappy forever after,
Never again would I see your smiling face,
But from my mind memories I couldn’t erase.

All I would have had are past memoirs,
It would have hurt to think & opened my scars,
Laying there alone in my bed at night,
Pining for you while hugging my pillow tight.

Without you my soul would have be so lost,
My life would have been cold like frost,
I couldn’t see my life without you next to me,
Alive & alone in this world I didn’t want to be.

Tears fell like little rivers down my pale cheeks,
Heart felt live giving up it felt so weak,
Felt like I had just been turned to stone,
Never before had I felt so very alone.





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The Day I Nearly Lost You

Contributed by pixie on Wednesday, 8th September 2004 @ 11:44:50 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



The day I nearly lost you,
You’re soul must have been shaded in blue,
I know how hard it is to walk away,
From someone you love more every day.

My heart sank right down to my feet,
Me & heartache were about to finally meet,
The pain surged around my veins,
Our love was flowing down the drains.

Thoughts of never hearing your laughter.
Made me feel unhappy forever after,
Never again would I see your smiling face,
But from my mind memories I couldn’t erase.

All I would have had are past memoirs,
It would have hurt to think & opened my scars,
Laying there alone in my bed at night,
Pining for you while hugging my pillow tight.

Without you my soul would have be so lost,
My life would have been cold like frost,
I couldn’t see my life without you next to me,
Alive & alone in this world I didn’t want to be.

Tears fell like little rivers down my pale cheeks,
Heart felt live giving up it felt so weak,
Felt like I had just been turned to stone,
Never before had I felt so very alone.









Copyright © pixie ... [ 2004-09-08 11:44:50]
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Re: The Day I Nearly Lost You (User Rating: 1 )
by Luinil on Wednesday, 8th September 2004 @ 11:48:53 AM AEST
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what a sad time this must've been-- beautiful poem *


Re: The Day I Nearly Lost You (User Rating: 1 )
by lostinmyself on Wednesday, 8th September 2004 @ 12:05:06 PM AEST
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*hugs you*
Well I'm glad you're pulling through,
I was worried for a bit, there.
Stay strong, you can get through this.
Many. many hugs, Phil xxx


Re: The Day I Nearly Lost You (User Rating: 1 )
by Bruce on Wednesday, 8th September 2004 @ 12:14:57 PM AEST
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you make me cry for you xx


Re: The Day I Nearly Lost You (User Rating: 1 )
by poetmarie on Wednesday, 8th September 2004 @ 01:55:49 PM AEST
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Very sad and touching. I feel for you and can identify very much. I've been there.




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