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Array ( [sid] => 6277 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Endless Thoughts [time] => 2002-11-06 03:40:00 [hometext] => this is not about me personally...but about what it might feel like to want to die.....just exploring diffrernt emotions...comments are apreciated [bodytext] => My mind is invaded by endless thoughts
Of how to take my life
My every muscle trembles
As I reach out for that knife
I have never been so scared
Never this afraid
Tears flood into my eyes
As my wrist is pressed into the blade
The blood runs between my fingers
And drips onto the floor
I promise myself that soon
My pain will be no more
The thoughts inside my head
Still running, they won’t stop
I begin to weaken
And my tears turn into sobs
Soaking up the carpet
And streaking down my cloths
My blood escapes me faster now
Like rushing water does a hose
I gently close my eyes
And pray for death to creep
I collapse onto the bed
And wait to sleep my final asleep
[comments] => 6 [counter] => 239 [topic] => 36 [informant] => horseluver [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )
Endless Thoughts

Contributed by horseluver on Wednesday, 6th November 2002 @ 03:40:00 AM in AEST
Topic: Suicide



My mind is invaded by endless thoughts
Of how to take my life
My every muscle trembles
As I reach out for that knife
I have never been so scared
Never this afraid
Tears flood into my eyes
As my wrist is pressed into the blade
The blood runs between my fingers
And drips onto the floor
I promise myself that soon
My pain will be no more
The thoughts inside my head
Still running, they won’t stop
I begin to weaken
And my tears turn into sobs
Soaking up the carpet
And streaking down my cloths
My blood escapes me faster now
Like rushing water does a hose
I gently close my eyes
And pray for death to creep
I collapse onto the bed
And wait to sleep my final asleep




Copyright © horseluver ... [ 2002-11-06 03:40:00]
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Re: Endless Thoughts (User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on Wednesday, 6th November 2002 @ 03:55:19 AM AEST
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Good write
It says alot of things
that hit home with me
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::.






Re: Endless Thoughts (User Rating: 1 )
by Rakerman1999 on Wednesday, 6th November 2002 @ 08:13:26 AM AEST
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Powerful! Thats the way depression can rip at the soul. For having never experienced it...you put it into words quite well! Great write!


Re: Endless Thoughts (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Wednesday, 6th November 2002 @ 10:36:27 AM AEST
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Awesome write....Great imagery...glad it's not personal...
Jenni


Re: Endless Thoughts (User Rating: 1 )
by orgygirl on Saturday, 9th November 2002 @ 02:08:32 AM AEST
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This poem really got to me. Its amazing how you can put yourself into the very position so many of us have been in. This poem is an excellent example of talent. I'd love to read more of your work.

Take care.


Re: Endless Thoughts (User Rating: 1 )
by lost_word on Sunday, 10th November 2002 @ 02:30:57 PM AEST
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its not easy writing from the stand-point of someone else and u did a great job.


Re: Endless Thoughts (User Rating: 1 )
by Wrybod on Tuesday, 22nd April 2003 @ 09:37:49 AM AEST
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Why, why why do these sort of poems attract so much attention??????





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