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Array ( [sid] => 62685 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Drifting apart [time] => 2004-09-05 20:18:24 [hometext] => This would be a poem I made for my x-best friend who suposably ended our friendship because she got mad b/c i wouldent buy her stuff from tim hortons....how low is that like seriously!?? [bodytext] => Angers slowly rising, your eyes are dark and dim,
Look at me with hate, whats caused the madness within?
I don't understand where you get off thinking that im dumb,
You've started to dig a hole in me and now you've left me numb,
Sure I use to miss you, but now I don't even care,
I had such great hopes for you but now they're no longer there,
You think that life's just a game, playing everyone including me,
You just don't care about how you hurt others, why can't you see?
Your heading down the wrong path and you were bringing me along,
But now I've turned away and I know that you are wrong,
So tell me now is this then end or is it just the start?
All that I know is that we are slowly drifting apart. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 166 [topic] => 32 [informant] => XxNights_ChildxX [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )

Drifting apart

Contributed by XxNights_ChildxX on Sunday, 5th September 2004 @ 08:18:24 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

Angers slowly rising, your eyes are dark and dim,
Look at me with hate, whats caused the madness within?
I don't understand where you get off thinking that im dumb,
You've started to dig a hole in me and now you've left me numb,
Sure I use to miss you, but now I don't even care,
I had such great hopes for you but now they're no longer there,
You think that life's just a game, playing everyone including me,
You just don't care about how you hurt others, why can't you see?
Your heading down the wrong path and you were bringing me along,
But now I've turned away and I know that you are wrong,
So tell me now is this then end or is it just the start?
All that I know is that we are slowly drifting apart.

Copyright © XxNights_ChildxX ... [ 2004-09-05 20:18:24]
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Re: Drifting apart (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Sunday, 5th September 2004 @ 09:32:34 PM AEST
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excellent write. withdrawing from someone is one of the hardest emotional pains there are. and what i said in my previous comment applies here also with the rhyme and flow. i wish i could be as consistent.

Re: Drifting apart (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Sunday, 5th September 2004 @ 09:44:21 PM AEST
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Another beautiful write... you write with such feelings.... Keep it up...
Jenni

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