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You are the cause
That i mutilate my arms
You are the reason
You are the cause
That I've been depressed all along
You are the reason
You are the cause
That my hope is all gone
Now is the time
To end it all
I give you the blame
And give it to God
You ruined me mentally
I went through abuse
But now it all ends
It is no use
Cutting is releaving
To all my pain
But this time
I've gone insane
The pain is surfacing
The blade is a good friend
But it won't let it end
I've tried everything
But nothing will let me die
I just want to commit suicide
To die would be lovely
It would be great
It's my time to choose
It's my ****ing fate
So now you know
You were the reason
You were the cause
For everything all along [comments] => 5 [counter] => 185 [topic] => 36 [informant] => BloodyTears5 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 1 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

Reason

Contributed by BloodyTears5 on Sunday, 5th September 2004 @ 07:22:46 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

You are the reason
You are the cause
That i mutilate my arms
You are the reason
You are the cause
That I've been depressed all along
You are the reason
You are the cause
That my hope is all gone
Now is the time
To end it all
I give you the blame
And give it to God
You ruined me mentally
I went through abuse
But now it all ends
It is no use
Cutting is releaving
To all my pain
But this time
I've gone insane
The pain is surfacing
The blade is a good friend
But it won't let it end
I've tried everything
But nothing will let me die
I just want to commit suicide
To die would be lovely
It would be great
It's my time to choose
It's my ****ing fate
So now you know
You were the reason
You were the cause
For everything all along

Copyright © BloodyTears5 ... [ 2004-09-05 19:22:46]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Reason (User Rating: 1 )
by Luinil on Sunday, 5th September 2004 @ 07:39:06 PM AEST
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sounds like a horrible place to be in... glad it's in the past. your wording is wonderful *

Re: Reason (User Rating: 1 )
by bite_me on Sunday, 5th September 2004 @ 07:58:17 PM AEST
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heya, that was nicely writtin, hope your ok, well just wanted to say, im always here to talk to, if you need/want too!

Ella

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Re: Reason (User Rating: 1 )
by Kevin on Sunday, 5th September 2004 @ 11:26:05 PM AEST
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Awesome write, (again...), keep it up, i love your stuff.

Re: Reason (User Rating: 1 )
by wild_girl121 on Monday, 6th September 2004 @ 02:06:24 AM AEST
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wow that is really serious , im glade ur doin better...it was good wording though. if u need to talk my AIM is GiganticOriental ........

Re: Reason (User Rating: 1 )
by darkangeleyes57 on Tuesday, 24th May 2005 @ 11:55:53 AM AEST
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even though it is your past, it can come a haunt you bad. The blade is also my friend and depression for me is my only real best friend you i can always count on. Try to stay happy and think positive, i know it's hard when all around is negativity. great poem

christina

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