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Array ( [sid] => 62452 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The War Of Friends [time] => 2004-09-03 17:22:01 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Everyone asks me why im weird,
Its b/c there hatered finally sank in.
All the lies and **** they said
All the things I never did.

They say Im not "good enough" to be in their group,
But yet they keep inviting more in to stay,
As i set and watched as the people feeled in,
A group of friends came my way.

I have friends that Im proud of.
They make me laugh everytime I cry.
We thought we would never be broken up.
But what none of us knew was the preps were planning to stike.

There once was eight of us,
And then they came,
They took one then two followed.
When they acttacked we lost some friends,
We begin to hate and argue with one another,

I swear they planned it,
They knew who they would take,
Everyday their group gets bigger
and then they plan another acttack.

I remember the war when I was struck down,
But I got back up and fought once more,
Now Im free of that preppy world.

I set and watch as i lose more friends,
I set and watch the hatered sink in,
I act like I dont care,
But I know I do,
I set and watch some friends fade away,
As I set and prepare for the next attack,
Then I swear I wont even leave out my door.

I set and watch as two more go,
All fading away into a different life,
A different world, a new way.
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The War Of Friends

Contributed by iPaRtYiNpInK12 on Friday, 3rd September 2004 @ 05:22:01 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems



Everyone asks me why im weird,
Its b/c there hatered finally sank in.
All the lies and **** they said
All the things I never did.

They say Im not "good enough" to be in their group,
But yet they keep inviting more in to stay,
As i set and watched as the people feeled in,
A group of friends came my way.

I have friends that Im proud of.
They make me laugh everytime I cry.
We thought we would never be broken up.
But what none of us knew was the preps were planning to stike.

There once was eight of us,
And then they came,
They took one then two followed.
When they acttacked we lost some friends,
We begin to hate and argue with one another,

I swear they planned it,
They knew who they would take,
Everyday their group gets bigger
and then they plan another acttack.

I remember the war when I was struck down,
But I got back up and fought once more,
Now Im free of that preppy world.

I set and watch as i lose more friends,
I set and watch the hatered sink in,
I act like I dont care,
But I know I do,
I set and watch some friends fade away,
As I set and prepare for the next attack,
Then I swear I wont even leave out my door.

I set and watch as two more go,
All fading away into a different life,
A different world, a new way.




Copyright © iPaRtYiNpInK12 ... [ 2004-09-03 17:22:01]
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Re: The War Of Friends (User Rating: 1 )
by wild_girl121 on Friday, 3rd September 2004 @ 05:51:59 PM AEST
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wow this is really good.... i now what u mean,
those groups get bigger but then again, u findout who ur true friends are their the ones that stick around

angie


Re: The War Of Friends (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 6th November 2004 @ 07:25:00 PM AEST
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OMG.... girl that was probley one of the Best poems i've read soo far.... so true so much feelings ......... i never knew u thought that... way well GREAT WRITE and keep up the good work !! All I can say is wow !!




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