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Array ( [sid] => 62328 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => My friends bottle pain [time] => 2004-09-02 18:11:16 [hometext] => Ever get that helpless feeling because everyone around you's upset? Or maybe just because there's so much wrong with the world you can't fix? Same here... [bodytext] => Why can't everyone be happy?
It's killing me inside
To look around at people I know
Bottling pain inside
To watch them stow emotions
Anger, pain, and fear
Sorrow over something big
Such as a lost love so dear
They hide it all
Son't show pain
They'll never let me see them cry
Their tears like falling rain
But most of all I just don't get why
For eachother they make it worse
Yelling, screaming over little things
Over problems with natures diverse
Although the others did nothing
On them do they still blame
As if they're upset because
When they hid nobody came
But how could we?
If no one had known
IF they didn't give us any clue
If their pain they hadn't shown
I just want to help them all
See them show a true smile
So maybe, just maybe
I can once in a while [comments] => 5 [counter] => 165 [topic] => 32 [informant] => Kie-Kie [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )
My friends bottle pain

Contributed by Kie-Kie on Thursday, 2nd September 2004 @ 06:11:16 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry



Why can't everyone be happy?
It's killing me inside
To look around at people I know
Bottling pain inside
To watch them stow emotions
Anger, pain, and fear
Sorrow over something big
Such as a lost love so dear
They hide it all
Son't show pain
They'll never let me see them cry
Their tears like falling rain
But most of all I just don't get why
For eachother they make it worse
Yelling, screaming over little things
Over problems with natures diverse
Although the others did nothing
On them do they still blame
As if they're upset because
When they hid nobody came
But how could we?
If no one had known
IF they didn't give us any clue
If their pain they hadn't shown
I just want to help them all
See them show a true smile
So maybe, just maybe
I can once in a while




Copyright © Kie-Kie ... [ 2004-09-02 18:11:16]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: My friends bottle pain (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Thursday, 2nd September 2004 @ 06:14:10 PM AEST
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excellent write kie squared. sometimes you cant help others, they have to do it on their own. you can only watch them and hope.


Re: My friends bottle pain (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 2nd September 2004 @ 06:22:30 PM AEST
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Nicely put kie
We can't help everyone, but maybe we can put a smile on a face or two once in a while.
:)


Re: My friends bottle pain (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Thursday, 2nd September 2004 @ 10:10:35 PM AEST
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I know how you feel here I'm having problems with a friend of mine right now I just wish I can make things right at times! Christina


Re: My friends bottle pain (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenn2004 on Friday, 3rd September 2004 @ 02:08:27 AM AEST
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I know what u mean i hate it that people have to go through pain like that. None deserves to feel like that. Good write!!!


Re: My friends bottle pain (User Rating: 1 )
by sweetangeluk on Friday, 3rd September 2004 @ 02:55:47 PM AEST
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I can relate to this one Kie. Hard when you want to help yet they will not open up.
You can only say you will always be there as a friend if they wish to confide in you.

A wonderful poem enjoyed


Love Sweetangelukxxxxx




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