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Array ( [sid] => 61580 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Death Blooms [time] => 2004-08-27 13:31:05 [hometext] => i cant remember if i wrote another like this beour :oP oh well! [bodytext] => death blooms
apon my skin

slowly bubbleing out
then trickleing down my arm

as i move the blade
in see-saw formation

forming shapes on my arm
forming red spilling words

with crazy eyes
i glance about

this empty bathroom
where i hide my death soul in

i cant feel the blade move up my arm
higher up to my shoulder

stab it in deep
the blood gushs out

today feels right
for this careless suicide

dip my finger in the blood
and write out my sorrows

on mirrors
on doors

untill i run out of space
and colapse to the floor

where death still blooms
apon my skin

the message replays this:

"I Died For Sin" [comments] => 3 [counter] => 157 [topic] => 36 [informant] => TwEeK [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

Death Blooms

Contributed by TwEeK on Friday, 27th August 2004 @ 01:31:05 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

death blooms
apon my skin

slowly bubbleing out
then trickleing down my arm

as i move the blade
in see-saw formation

forming shapes on my arm
forming red spilling words

with crazy eyes
i glance about

this empty bathroom
where i hide my death soul in

i cant feel the blade move up my arm
higher up to my shoulder

stab it in deep
the blood gushs out

today feels right
for this careless suicide

dip my finger in the blood
and write out my sorrows

on mirrors
on doors

untill i run out of space
and colapse to the floor

where death still blooms
apon my skin

the message replays this:

"I Died For Sin"

Copyright © TwEeK ... [ 2004-08-27 13:31:05]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Death Blooms (User Rating: 1 )
by deadreckoning1983 on Friday, 27th August 2004 @ 02:12:21 PM AEST
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I'm not sure exactly this was about, but i liked it. i usually don't read suicide poetry, but you had a catchy name. and true to that you didn't disappoint. keep up the good work.

Re: Death Blooms (User Rating: 1 )
by deathdrop on Friday, 27th August 2004 @ 07:11:21 PM AEST
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oooh. haunting suff.. i really like your style though...

Re: Death Blooms (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Friday, 27th August 2004 @ 11:16:58 PM AEST
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powerful and hard hitting write.

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