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Array ( [sid] => 6143 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => YOU BOTH! [time] => 2002-11-03 12:30:00 [hometext] => The baby talking to the parents!
As the baby is know as a miscarriage! [bodytext] => I KNOW YOU BOTH LOVED ME,
AND WANTED ME SO MUCH.
BUT TO MY DEAR SWEET MOMMY,
PLEASE DON'T CRY FOR ME.
AS YOU KNOW I'M NOT THERE
JUST REMEMBER I LOVE YOU TWO.
PLEASE DON'T STAY BLUE
I JUST WASN'T STRONG ENOUGH
TO STAY INSIDE YOUR WOMB
MOMMY I KNOW YOU LOVE MY DADDY
SO PLEASE STAY TOGETHER ALWAYS
BUT TO MY DEAR SWEET DADDY
PLEASE DADDY MY MOMMY NEEDS YOU
DON'T SIT AND SAY NOTHING
TRY TO HUG HER AND SAY SOMETHING
MY MOMMY LOVES YOU SO MUCH
DON'T RUN FROM HER TOUCH
REMEMBER WE COULD OF BEEN A FAMILY
BUT YOU TWO STILL CAN BE
DON'T FEEL BAD ABOUT ME
YOU TWO STILL HAVE A CHANCE
REMEMBER ONE THING ONLY
I WILL LOVE YOU'S FOREVER AND ALWAYS! [comments] => 3 [counter] => 210 [topic] => 39 [informant] => chantal [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Grief )

YOU BOTH!

Contributed by chantal on Sunday, 3rd November 2002 @ 12:30:00 PM in AEST
Topic: Grief

I KNOW YOU BOTH LOVED ME,
AND WANTED ME SO MUCH.
BUT TO MY DEAR SWEET MOMMY,
PLEASE DON'T CRY FOR ME.
AS YOU KNOW I'M NOT THERE
JUST REMEMBER I LOVE YOU TWO.
PLEASE DON'T STAY BLUE
I JUST WASN'T STRONG ENOUGH
TO STAY INSIDE YOUR WOMB
MOMMY I KNOW YOU LOVE MY DADDY
SO PLEASE STAY TOGETHER ALWAYS
BUT TO MY DEAR SWEET DADDY
PLEASE DADDY MY MOMMY NEEDS YOU
DON'T SIT AND SAY NOTHING
TRY TO HUG HER AND SAY SOMETHING
MY MOMMY LOVES YOU SO MUCH
DON'T RUN FROM HER TOUCH
REMEMBER WE COULD OF BEEN A FAMILY
BUT YOU TWO STILL CAN BE
DON'T FEEL BAD ABOUT ME
YOU TWO STILL HAVE A CHANCE
REMEMBER ONE THING ONLY
I WILL LOVE YOU'S FOREVER AND ALWAYS!

Copyright Â© chantal ... [ 2002-11-03 12:30:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: YOU BOTH! (User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on Sunday, 3rd November 2002 @ 12:41:18 PM AEST
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You'll have to forgive me
i couldnt finish reading this
poem it hit home with me
pretty hard tonight
so i only got
to the part where it says
I JUST WASN'T STRONG ENOUGH
TO STAY INSIDE YOUR WOMB
Keep em' coming
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::.

Re: YOU BOTH! (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Monday, 4th November 2002 @ 01:52:26 AM AEST
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Wow how terriblely sad,it was so beautiful!!!
Christina

Re: YOU BOTH! (User Rating: 1 )
by chantal on Monday, 4th November 2002 @ 02:14:06 AM AEST
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THX! To you all! I often read the poems i made for my cousin on this subject you know i think of how the baby would feel, What the baby must feel in an abortion situation as well, All to often tried to write poems for this but just cant seem to get into it, Get goose bumps and feel to much sorrow, My heart just aches for any kind of loss of a baby,child

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