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Array ( [sid] => 61140 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => ~COULD IT BE?~ [time] => 2004-08-23 15:42:13 [hometext] => This is the first poem i ever attempted, it came out of nowhere, well it came from my heart :-) [bodytext] => COULD IT BE?

NO, I WOULD NEVER LET IT BE. . . .

BUT IT FEELS LIKE. . . .

NO, IT COULDN’T POSSIBLY BE THAT.

BUT I THINK IT IS, COULD HE HAVE FOUND A PLACE IN MY HEART?

NOW I’M SO CONFUSED, I DON’T KNOW WHERE TO START

I THOUGHT THAT NOONE COULD EVER AGAIN GET TO WHERE HE’S AT.

IT WAS UNDER LOCK AND KEY AND THAT WAS THAT.

NOW HERE HE IS BEFORE ME

READY TO LOVE ME, WITH HIS ARMS OPEN WIDE

EVERY INSTINCT I HAVE TELLS ME TO TURN AROUND RUN AND HIDE

BUT THEN I STOP, . . . .THAT FEELING, THERE IT IS AGAIN. . . .PARALYZING ME. . . . .

LEAVING ME NO CHOICE BUT TO LET GO OF ALL OF THE HEARTACHE IN MY PAST

I JUST HOPE THIS TIME, WITH HIM, IT WILL LAST. ~
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~COULD IT BE?~

Contributed by jv on Monday, 23rd August 2004 @ 03:42:13 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

COULD IT BE?

NO, I WOULD NEVER LET IT BE. . . .

BUT IT FEELS LIKE. . . .

NO, IT COULDN’T POSSIBLY BE THAT.

BUT I THINK IT IS, COULD HE HAVE FOUND A PLACE IN MY HEART?

NOW I’M SO CONFUSED, I DON’T KNOW WHERE TO START

I THOUGHT THAT NOONE COULD EVER AGAIN GET TO WHERE HE’S AT.

IT WAS UNDER LOCK AND KEY AND THAT WAS THAT.

NOW HERE HE IS BEFORE ME

READY TO LOVE ME, WITH HIS ARMS OPEN WIDE

EVERY INSTINCT I HAVE TELLS ME TO TURN AROUND RUN AND HIDE

BUT THEN I STOP, . . . .THAT FEELING, THERE IT IS AGAIN. . . .PARALYZING ME. . . . .

LEAVING ME NO CHOICE BUT TO LET GO OF ALL OF THE HEARTACHE IN MY PAST

I JUST HOPE THIS TIME, WITH HIM, IT WILL LAST. ~

Copyright Â© jv ... [ 2004-08-23 15:42:13]
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Re: ~COULD IT BE?~ (User Rating: 1 )
by Hannah_Heaven on Monday, 23rd August 2004 @ 03:52:46 PM AEST
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aww this is so cute an at the same time revealing a painful past
thank you for both experiences
luv han xx

Re: ~COULD IT BE?~ (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 23rd August 2004 @ 07:27:42 PM AEST
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The poem is good for your first one. Keep writing and you will get better and better. But lose the caps lock please. When you do that it is like you are shouting the words at us.

Rita

Re: ~COULD IT BE?~ (User Rating: 1 )
by kidpoet_213 on Monday, 23rd August 2004 @ 08:49:01 PM AEST
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A very good 1st attempt... keep it up... u can only get better... I'm w/ Rita loose the caps lock... it soes make it seem like ur words are being shouted to us...
~Donna~

Re: ~COULD IT BE?~ (User Rating: 1 )
by NeverSayNever on Saturday, 13th January 2007 @ 06:29:24 AM AEST
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Great poem describes just how a lot of us feel. Its exactly how I felt when i met my girl, i dont have to hope anymore. I'm so glad i let go of my painful past

Re: ~COULD IT BE?~ (User Rating: 1 )
by NeverSayNever on Saturday, 13th January 2007 @ 06:30:19 AM AEST
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Great poem describes just how a lot of us feel. Its exactly how I felt when i met my girl, i dont have to hope anymore. I'm so glad i let go of my painful past

Re: ~COULD IT BE?~ (User Rating: 1 )
by NeverSayNever on Saturday, 13th January 2007 @ 06:30:32 AM AEST
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Great poem describes just how a lot of us feel. Its exactly how I felt when i met my girl, i dont have to hope anymore. I'm so glad i let go of my painful past

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