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[aid] => mick
[title] => Battle Field Of Sorrows
[time] => 2004-08-22 12:30:02
[hometext] => this is -ok-..... I mainly like the last stanza.... please comment on this and my other poem Mr.Johnny Shoot Up..... I have been waiting for a comment on that one...
[bodytext] => I sit in the night Gazing up at the stars Realizing how it's all changed And seeing my many lost "wars" Remembering of the battles Fought and Lost Realizing it was all too much Too much of a great cost. The battle field in my head Was drenched in tears of pain Too much to loose With nothing to gain. And as that cool night breeze Brushes upon my face Realizing I have many battles to come Loosing the war, Loosing the race. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 189 [topic] => 48 [informant] => Alina [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )
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