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Array ( [sid] => 60920 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Red Reminder [time] => 2004-08-21 13:23:12 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Holding her breath,
She pulls back her sleeve,
Pink lines forgotten remind her,
Of what she use to be,
Her past dark, unsteady
Trouble was never far behind,
Opening anger, faults, sorrow
Giving up was her way of thinking,
Drinking away pain, life, guilt
Falling down in her darkest hour,
Red droplets fall, glass shattered
Tears shed draining her weak
Losing control, balance, sleep
She simply threw it all away,
Painting her world black,
Will she ever find her way back?
Screaming out loud blocking out,
The voice's inside her head,
Memory’s set her skin on fire,
Her soul spread upon the soaking red sheet,
Lies told with deceit,
Looking down at her red reminder.

© C.S "04" [comments] => 7 [counter] => 403 [topic] => 13 [informant] => carebear [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 8 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )
Red Reminder

Contributed by carebear on Saturday, 21st August 2004 @ 01:23:12 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



Holding her breath,
She pulls back her sleeve,
Pink lines forgotten remind her,
Of what she use to be,
Her past dark, unsteady
Trouble was never far behind,
Opening anger, faults, sorrow
Giving up was her way of thinking,
Drinking away pain, life, guilt
Falling down in her darkest hour,
Red droplets fall, glass shattered
Tears shed draining her weak
Losing control, balance, sleep
She simply threw it all away,
Painting her world black,
Will she ever find her way back?
Screaming out loud blocking out,
The voice's inside her head,
Memory’s set her skin on fire,
Her soul spread upon the soaking red sheet,
Lies told with deceit,
Looking down at her red reminder.

© C.S "04"




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Re: Red Reminder (User Rating: 1 )
by deathdrop on Saturday, 21st August 2004 @ 01:27:43 PM AEST
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it holds a nicely thought up tiltle and the your is awesome too.
i'd like to read more of your work so keep them comming!


Re: Red Reminder (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Saturday, 21st August 2004 @ 01:30:05 PM AEST
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a very pained write, filled with raw emotion, good expression, your words hit a chord with me,

pixie xx


Re: Red Reminder (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Saturday, 21st August 2004 @ 02:11:01 PM AEST
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great write and emotion.


Re: Red Reminder (User Rating: 1 )
by PoeticMystery on Saturday, 21st August 2004 @ 02:14:08 PM AEST
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wow-very emotional poem. This was great!


Re: Red Reminder (User Rating: 1 )
by cauchy3 on Saturday, 21st August 2004 @ 02:39:28 PM AEST
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wine-coloring flirt my white

slleves are wite my floating are right

grapes are red

lives are read

Bloods are writing

History still cool in wire

Tricks are threads in boxes

Lands are our boons

Laws are list in book

They are hard to heard

We are hearts to hearts

But wars are harsh


Re: Red Reminder (User Rating: 1 )
by CrimsonTears on Saturday, 21st August 2004 @ 07:05:03 PM AEST
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great poem..one that i can relate to...awesome job

Lots of Love
CrimsonTears


Re: Red Reminder (User Rating: 1 )
by Jason_Robert_Britt on Wednesday, 4th February 2009 @ 04:57:04 AM AEST
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I wish I could take your pain and experiances into the void that is me.... missing my carebear =(




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