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Array ( [sid] => 60843 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Left to Fade [time] => 2004-08-20 19:46:45 [hometext] => In life you only fade away... [bodytext] => Left to Fade

Wandering along the path
Slowly losing my life
As I try to find
And gain back time
I lost it traveling this path
Through the darkness of life

The sands of time
Takes a second of life
And I begin to find
All I missed in life
What I can't gain back
Whenever I try

The darkness of time
Brightened by memories
That transpired through life
No longer able to be seen
As they fade into the distance
To a place never to be revisited
Again by me and I'm left frayed
For ever being alive to this day [comments] => 6 [counter] => 154 [topic] => 48 [informant] => Essentially9 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 12 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Left to Fade

Contributed by Essentially9 on Friday, 20th August 2004 @ 07:46:45 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Left to Fade

Wandering along the path
Slowly losing my life
As I try to find
And gain back time
I lost it traveling this path
Through the darkness of life

The sands of time
Takes a second of life
And I begin to find
All I missed in life
What I can't gain back
Whenever I try

The darkness of time
Brightened by memories
That transpired through life
No longer able to be seen
As they fade into the distance
To a place never to be revisited
Again by me and I'm left frayed
For ever being alive to this day

Copyright © Essentially9 ... [ 2004-08-20 19:46:45]
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Re: Left to Fade (User Rating: 1 )
by cheech on Friday, 20th August 2004 @ 07:59:55 PM AEST
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yo yo yo what up G?listen up that was a very wonderful write and very interesting,keep up the wonderful work,

ur pal

cheech

Re: Left to Fade (User Rating: 1 )
by waos on Friday, 20th August 2004 @ 08:04:51 PM AEST
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ya, was good, nice job

Re: Left to Fade (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Friday, 20th August 2004 @ 09:05:39 PM AEST
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I LOVE THIS!!!!!
sigh....never again to be revisited.... except in my dreams......

Jenni

Re: Left to Fade (User Rating: 1 )
by savedbydeath on Friday, 20th August 2004 @ 09:19:23 PM AEST
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SWEET *ss poem,this was so cool,u do such a great job on writing material that reaches down into our souls and we can see something we could never see before,awsome write keep up the great work

later ur home girl

savedbydeath

Re: Left to Fade (User Rating: 1 )
by Silent-No-More on Saturday, 21st August 2004 @ 02:39:51 PM AEST
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Interesting write.... obviously, a reflecting back on past times. It could, I think, be interpreted as sad... but I find some positive in it as there is awareness and insight embedded here. I enjoyed this... it got my mind turning....

Hoping that I've interpreted this correctly as a closing of a door to the past in order to move forward,
SNM

Re: Left to Fade (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Sunday, 22nd August 2004 @ 05:14:29 AM AEST
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I understand how you feel and I wish sometimes that there were some roads I never traveled and sone things i never knew

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