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[aid] => Mick
[title] => What Do You See
[time] => 2002-11-02 11:15:00
[hometext] => This is about the man I love, who is also my bestfriend, and all the things I would like to ask him.
[bodytext] => Close your eyes...what do you see
Is it a lasting picture of you and me
Are we together, or far apart
Do you love me with all your heart
Are we holding hands, or kissing
Is it me you are missing
Am I beautiful to you in every way
If I asked you for forever...
What would you say
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What Do You See
Contributed by
ShadowsCloud
on
Saturday, 2nd November 2002 @ 11:15:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
SecretLove
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Close your eyes...what do you see
Is it a lasting picture of you and me
Are we together, or far apart
Do you love me with all your heart
Are we holding hands, or kissing
Is it me you are missing
Am I beautiful to you in every way
If I asked you for forever...
What would you say
Copyright ©
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2002-11-02 11:15:00]
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Re: What Do You See
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by OreO on
Saturday, 2nd November 2002 @ 11:30:26 AM AEST
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I enjoy reading your poems
This was so sweet
Keep em' coming
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::.
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Re: What Do You See
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Saturday, 2nd November 2002 @ 12:17:23 PM AEST
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This is so sweet....
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Re: What Do You See
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by MisterRight on
Saturday, 2nd November 2002 @ 03:56:53 PM AEST
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Nice write... my advice would be ask him. Whats the point of love if you don't give it the chance to thrive?
Curtis |
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Re: What Do You See
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by Rachel on
Tuesday, 5th November 2002 @ 08:12:37 AM AEST
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| That is so sweet! I feel the same way all the time. Great to write! |
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Re: What Do You See
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by sweetolbaby on
Saturday, 16th November 2002 @ 02:07:34 AM AEST
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| I really love this poem! You always write such good poems! I might dedicate this poem to the boy i'm talking to now |
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Re: What Do You See
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by Unaekseveer1 on
Tuesday, 19th November 2002 @ 12:55:51 PM AEST
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Blimey Candice,
What a question this would be!
Excellent poem you've written here, I really like it, but what a question!!
Why don't I get asked this?? Oh well, I can dream.
Be sure to let us know what he says when you ask!
With love
Dean:-) |
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Re: What Do You See
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by ShadowsCloud on
Tuesday, 19th November 2002 @ 04:01:36 PM AEST
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Dean, Thanks for your comment. This was written about the guy that I am going to go for it with. And I will let you know how it goes when I ask. I think I'm going to give him this poem the next time I talk to him. I really hope that it goes well. I don't know why you don't get asked this, but you never know you might be asked one day. You can never know what like has in shore for you. Thanks again for you comment.
ShadowsCloud |
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Re: What Do You See
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by stateofgray on
Monday, 28th April 2003 @ 07:56:11 PM AEST
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| aced, i love it |
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Re: What Do You See
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by wordsy on
Tuesday, 29th April 2003 @ 10:30:26 PM AEST
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A really fun read. I have been around the poetry circles for a while and I think it's a shame that more poets can't have fun writing poetry. You seem to enjoy it so much that it shows in your words. Thank you so much for sharing your thoughts with us all.
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Re: What Do You See
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by ShadowsCloud on
Sunday, 4th May 2003 @ 11:48:34 PM AEST
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I do enjoy if very much. I stated writing poetry for fun when I was 7, and have been writing for almost 14 years now. The main reason that I write poetry is still for fun. Than you for your comment.
ShadowsCloud |
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Re: What Do You See
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by Sapphire on
Tuesday, 24th June 2003 @ 07:15:11 AM AEST
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A lovely poem. Imagery is lovely too. You write very well.
Sapphire |
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Re: What Do You See
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by Trisha on
Wednesday, 13th August 2003 @ 03:02:48 AM AEST
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| Sorry it's so late for me to sign this peom. I do like this and who are you writing this about or you just thought about this. |
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Re: What Do You See
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by ShadowsCloud on
Saturday, 23rd August 2003 @ 11:40:02 PM AEST
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Trisha, this poem was written about a guy that I am deeply in love with. These are questions that I one day hope I am brave enough to ask him.
ShadowsCloud |
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