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Array ( [sid] => 60792 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Letting You Go [time] => 2004-08-20 07:56:25 [hometext] => memories of the loved one that has now gone [bodytext] => gripping the images of that special moment
with tight fingers and white bulging knuckles
remember the day
remember the hour
why is it now that my life's so sour
riping the edges fraying all the corners
I can't let go of that kodak moment
my eyes burn holes in your face all night
if only I could face you real life tonight
no longer can I hold on to you for this long
the sweat is dripping onto the cold tiles
I feel all numb
I have to drop you
my controll is gone
the heat from the fire is near by
flames swoop you out of my aching hands
burn now and rest
I have to now live my life without you
that's for the best

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Letting You Go

Contributed by inoc on Friday, 20th August 2004 @ 07:56:25 AM in AEST
Topic: goodbyepoetry

gripping the images of that special moment
with tight fingers and white bulging knuckles
remember the day
remember the hour
why is it now that my life's so sour
riping the edges fraying all the corners
I can't let go of that kodak moment
my eyes burn holes in your face all night
if only I could face you real life tonight
no longer can I hold on to you for this long
the sweat is dripping onto the cold tiles
I feel all numb
I have to drop you
my controll is gone
the heat from the fire is near by
flames swoop you out of my aching hands
burn now and rest
I have to now live my life without you
that's for the best

Copyright © inoc ... [ 2004-08-20 07:56:25]
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Re: Letting You Go (User Rating: 1 )
by XPoeticChicX on Friday, 20th August 2004 @ 08:14:49 AM AEST
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*sigh* I know the feeling. Especially of loving someone you care and love so much for. And then they leave, and things go wrong, or they just don't want the person anymore. I understand. I lost someone too...and I love him very much, and it's just too hard to let go. Sometimes I wish there weren't such a thing as love. :(

Re: Letting You Go (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Friday, 20th August 2004 @ 08:38:26 AM AEST
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a very sad and emotional write Inoc, I am sorry that you lost someone special.....hugs

pixie xx

Re: Letting You Go (User Rating: 1 )
by yesi on Friday, 20th August 2004 @ 08:57:20 AM AEST
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I know how you feel. I recently also lost a loved one too, and it feels like crap. Slowly I'm letting him go.

-very nice write,
yesi

Re: Letting You Go (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Friday, 20th August 2004 @ 11:35:51 AM AEST
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It's always hard saying goodbye to the past... especially if it was a beautiful one....habg tight....be strong.....
Hugs
Jenni

Re: Letting You Go (User Rating: 1 )
by Bruce on Friday, 3rd September 2004 @ 07:29:41 AM AEST
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how beautiful and sad as well. the feeling and emotions r very real.xx

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