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Array ( [sid] => 60753 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => To Me [time] => 2004-08-19 22:50:38 [hometext] => somebody said don't quit writing, so here! [bodytext] => if i ache would you mistake this
as a preconditioned effort for attention
it's too late to ruse creations
there's nothing else i've failed to mention
the tension's getting worse.
more impossible than before.
a new race to be unearthed.
to bury me more and more.
i swore i'd never swear again
yes true again i lied
i swear i've sworn this again
couldn't even try...

well what's the possiblity
and what's this thing you want with me
when i should have put an end to
the story that will never end to me

case file closed and you know this
in the superstitious feel for the feeling
out under toe soon with limitations
brought upon my own in intrusive keelings
well it isn't even you.
at least i think this time.
what's it worth it's true.
choking down my own crime.
i swore i'd swear this again...

well what's the new epitome
now what the hell should it mean to me
i wouldn't even put the end to
the story won't begin to end to me

i hope to choke upon this lung
it never felt as if it's wrong to
so could you beat me down this once
much more than you would want to
than before when you didn't think
inbetween the trash and feeling weird
and i'll promise that i won't blink
no this time i'll just dissapear
with no hint of guilt...

what's the ending going to be
if only you could come this once with me
and think it just pretend to
this would be the end would you [comments] => 4 [counter] => 253 [topic] => 13 [informant] => remy [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )
To Me

Contributed by remy on Thursday, 19th August 2004 @ 10:50:38 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



if i ache would you mistake this
as a preconditioned effort for attention
it's too late to ruse creations
there's nothing else i've failed to mention
the tension's getting worse.
more impossible than before.
a new race to be unearthed.
to bury me more and more.
i swore i'd never swear again
yes true again i lied
i swear i've sworn this again
couldn't even try...

well what's the possiblity
and what's this thing you want with me
when i should have put an end to
the story that will never end to me

case file closed and you know this
in the superstitious feel for the feeling
out under toe soon with limitations
brought upon my own in intrusive keelings
well it isn't even you.
at least i think this time.
what's it worth it's true.
choking down my own crime.
i swore i'd swear this again...

well what's the new epitome
now what the hell should it mean to me
i wouldn't even put the end to
the story won't begin to end to me

i hope to choke upon this lung
it never felt as if it's wrong to
so could you beat me down this once
much more than you would want to
than before when you didn't think
inbetween the trash and feeling weird
and i'll promise that i won't blink
no this time i'll just dissapear
with no hint of guilt...

what's the ending going to be
if only you could come this once with me
and think it just pretend to
this would be the end would you




Copyright © remy ... [ 2004-08-19 22:50:38]
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Re: To Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Calista on Thursday, 19th August 2004 @ 11:08:32 PM AEST
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somebody was right! this is an excellent poem, marvelous! i love it, to quote my favorite part would be to quote the entire piece. i love your reference to the story, and wow-just everything! great write, thanks.
~Calista


Re: To Me (User Rating: 1 )
by CrimsonTears on Thursday, 19th August 2004 @ 11:15:59 PM AEST
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great write...excellent job...please do keep writing

Lots of Love
CrimsonTears


Re: To Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniela_Maria_Violin on Friday, 20th August 2004 @ 12:16:51 AM AEST
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wow, you actually posted something!
but it's so sad... *sigh*


Re: To Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Bohemian_with_a_pen on Friday, 20th August 2004 @ 06:59:24 AM AEST
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AWESOME!




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