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Array ( [sid] => 60580 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Angel Of Innocence. [time] => 2004-08-18 12:39:41 [hometext] => It's this whole, angel trapped in childs body thing. Where the child is neglected and stuff, and drowns waves of a thunder storm and is forgotten about. it's really sad stuff! ... but comments would be really nice though... [bodytext] => Thunder hits,
With lightening blasts,
Marking the grave,
Of the child of the past.

Her lifeless soul,
With be lost for-ever,
But risen by the waves,
With each thunder storm weather.

She and forgotten,
She was drowned by the waves.
And once dead she was pulled under.
NEVER TO BE SEEN AGAIN!

And if you listen very carefully,
You can still hear the cries!
Where the 'angel of innocence'
Defensively died! [comments] => 4 [counter] => 197 [topic] => 13 [informant] => deathdrop [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

The Angel Of Innocence.

Contributed by deathdrop on Wednesday, 18th August 2004 @ 12:39:41 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Thunder hits,
With lightening blasts,
Marking the grave,
Of the child of the past.

Her lifeless soul,
With be lost for-ever,
But risen by the waves,
With each thunder storm weather.

She and forgotten,
She was drowned by the waves.
And once dead she was pulled under.
NEVER TO BE SEEN AGAIN!

And if you listen very carefully,
You can still hear the cries!
Where the 'angel of innocence'
Defensively died!

Copyright © deathdrop ... [ 2004-08-18 12:39:41]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: The Angel Of Innocence. (User Rating: 1 )
by Chade on Wednesday, 18th August 2004 @ 03:47:46 PM AEST
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Thats a really nice poem. Its kind spooky though and has 101 means ythat can be read into it which is cool.

Chade

Re: The Angel Of Innocence. (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Wednesday, 18th August 2004 @ 05:47:25 PM AEST
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touching write
Michelle

Re: The Angel Of Innocence. (User Rating: 1 )
by corrupted_minds on Thursday, 19th August 2004 @ 06:01:48 AM AEST
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Firsty beautiful write, the emotions were definately there.. and secondly thank you for commenting on my poems, it means so much to me. Keep up the good writes.
Love always
corrupted_minds

Re: The Angel Of Innocence. (User Rating: 1 )
by lostinmyself on Friday, 20th August 2004 @ 12:42:04 PM AEST
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This is beautiful Rosie,
And yes, it is also very sad.
Nice idea.
Great write,
Phil xxx

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