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ANOTHER HOT LZ
Contributed by
docpardue
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Wednesday, 18th August 2004 @ 03:37:39 AM in AEST
Topic:
war
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Line up hurry up and wait Weighted down battle gear packed soldier Going on a mission in a God forsaken land
Here they come the copters Hueys graceful in flight With their distinctive song of woop-woop
The wind grabs dirt and rock Hitting us all around We board the copters one by one
Once airborne flying fast and high I am amazed by the beauty of the land Seems so peaceful farmers farming the land
Children and water buffalo Playing in the paddies Seemingly unconcerned by our approach
Signal comes to lock and load We descend fast and low Hovering above the earth
We jump off landing in the mud Then the bullets start flying Oh God, its another Hot LZ
Confusion is rampid Explosions all around Then the words IM HIT, echo from my throat
I call for medic then I realize I am he I hear others call my name I run to the voices rendering aid where I can
My wounds will have to wait These are my men It is time to do my magic medicine show
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docpardue
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2004-08-18 03:37:39] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: ANOTHER HOT LZ
(User Rating: 1 ) by emystar on
Wednesday, 18th August 2004 @ 03:42:02 AM AEST (User
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Sad but written well.
All soilders or ex soilders have a special place in my heart.
luv, huggs, thanks,
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Re: ANOTHER HOT LZ
(User Rating: 1 ) by bernard on
Wednesday, 18th August 2004 @ 03:44:04 AM AEST (User
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| As an old soldier I can appreciate the feeling behind this poem. Peace be yours from bernard. |
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Re: ANOTHER HOT LZ
(User Rating: 1 ) by Sinned on
Wednesday, 23rd February 2005 @ 08:08:19 AM AEST (User
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Medics are the backbone of the army. I believed then as I do now all of the Vietnam soldiers are HERO'S. I thank you for serving un that ungrateful war.Koera too was another unsupported war at home.
God bless all of our miltary.
Good poem.
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