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Array ( [sid] => 60039 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Perfect timing [time] => 2004-08-13 19:03:05 [hometext] => I dont know, but have a read. corrupted_minds [bodytext] => He was my friend, he made me cry,
He made me want to quickly die,
an overdose would be the key,
I’d die alone, and no one would see,
He makes me feel this every day,
If not in words, then other ways.
My minds corrupted, tarnished and torn,
He’d be happy now if I were gone,
He confirmed my fears, the floors I possess,
Didn’t make me feel better, made me feel less,
Fell into the shade, the clouded black,
Forever to go and never turn back,
I’d use a knife but I wouldn’t give him that pleasure,
I’m scarred enough, no body to treasure,
Drug me up, and let me fall,
No pain will come, been through it all,
I want to die, I feel this pain,
I’m ready now, for my life to claim,
Hand me the tablets, lay me on my bed,
Close my eyes and watch my head,
The thoughts leak free,
I’m finally me,
The rains stopped pouring, the sun is shining,
My peaceful death was of perfect timing.






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Perfect timing

Contributed by corrupted_minds on Friday, 13th August 2004 @ 07:03:05 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide



He was my friend, he made me cry,
He made me want to quickly die,
an overdose would be the key,
I’d die alone, and no one would see,
He makes me feel this every day,
If not in words, then other ways.
My minds corrupted, tarnished and torn,
He’d be happy now if I were gone,
He confirmed my fears, the floors I possess,
Didn’t make me feel better, made me feel less,
Fell into the shade, the clouded black,
Forever to go and never turn back,
I’d use a knife but I wouldn’t give him that pleasure,
I’m scarred enough, no body to treasure,
Drug me up, and let me fall,
No pain will come, been through it all,
I want to die, I feel this pain,
I’m ready now, for my life to claim,
Hand me the tablets, lay me on my bed,
Close my eyes and watch my head,
The thoughts leak free,
I’m finally me,
The rains stopped pouring, the sun is shining,
My peaceful death was of perfect timing.










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Re: Perfect timing (User Rating: 1 )
by Dizza_13 on Friday, 13th August 2004 @ 07:42:42 PM AEST
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Magnificent, striking, exquisite, beautiful, that’s all I
can say.

love always, dizza
xoxoxox


Re: Perfect timing (User Rating: 1 )
by WestCPunk on Friday, 13th August 2004 @ 08:35:47 PM AEST
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That was awesome I love the way you wrote it, lol i'm actually speechless it was that good....I feel like that at times although never went through with it but you never know one day i might not be here but i hope you're alright and know that there are people here you can talk to if you ever need anything!!
Much love,
Shelbi


Re: Perfect timing (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Saturday, 14th August 2004 @ 10:28:35 AM AEST
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wow, an awesome write,

pixie xx


Re: Perfect timing (User Rating: 1 )
by deathdrop on Thursday, 19th August 2004 @ 06:04:35 AM AEST
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a brilliant poem!
superb!
keep it up.


Re: Perfect timing (User Rating: 1 )
by allymp on Wednesday, 25th August 2004 @ 05:41:55 PM AEST
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great write... all your poems are amazing...keep writing

lots of luv*allymp




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